A New Year and its influence on people's life
No matter what country, culture or religion a New Year has been always one of a most exciting event in people's life.
But what makes it so valuable?
I think that people always need some resetting of counters. Counters in different spheres, like a business, private life, studying, health. Somebody wants to make his own business, other to find a better job or at least to find one.
That's very important because you can forget your previous failures, mistakes and start everything from scratch.
The second thing, that new ideas and plans always come with the next year. Everybody needs a second chance.
We all are people with our weaknesses but starting up with the new year give us a fresh breath.
Have you met with your goals in 2016? So that's a good time to set up the new ones.
I personally have done it already.
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The New Year and Its Influence on People's Lives
No matter what country, culture or religion, New Year has been always one of the most exciting events in people's lives.But what makes it so valuable?
I think that people need a distinct marker of the passage of time. They need an end, and then a beginning – in business, private life, studies, or health. One person may want to start his own business, another to find a better job or to find one at all.
Starting over is very important because you can forget your previous failures and mistakes and start everything from scratch.
The second reason is that new ideas and plans always come with the next year. Everybody needs a second chance.
We all are people with our weaknesses, but starting again with the new year gives us a fresh breath.
Have you met your goals in 2016? Now is a good time to set up new ones.
I personally have done it already.
Notes: Try not to use "that" as a pronoun in your writing. In speech, using "that" is extremely common and acceptable. In writing, it is ambiguous and not very good technique. Also, watch your punctuation and word choice. Finally, when you list things, make sure the listed things are all of the same "type." This grammar point is known as "maintaining parallel structure in lists" (http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/iteminaseries.htm). Nice job tackling an abstract and challenging topic!
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A New Year and its influence on people's life
No matter what country, culture or religion, a New Year has been always one of a most exciting events in people's life lives.(better to say "Irrespective of what country, culture or religion .....")
But what makes it so valuable?
I think that people always need some resetting of counters. Counters in different spheres, like a business, private life, studying, health. Somebody wants to make start or run his or her own business, others to find a better job or at least to find one any job.
That's very important because you can forget your previous failures, mistakes and start everything from scratch.
The second thing, is that new ideas and plans always come with the next year. Everybody needs a second chance.
We all are people with our weaknesses but starting up with the new year give us a fresh breath.
Have Did you meet with your goals in 2016? So that's now is a good time to set up the new ones.
I personally have done it already.
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