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How do I sleep like that? Today, I got up and felt like I had something in my mouth. It was soft and tender. I used a tissue paper to take it out and found that it was a blood clot and some blood. I also felt sore at my tongue. Oh! I must bit my tongue while sleeping again!. My mother told me that I always grinded my teeth while sleeping if I was very stressed. Sometimes, I bite my tongue by accident, but this time might be very strong bitten as I never had bleeding before. I went to city centre to buy something to protect my tongue. A shop assistance at a pharmacy advised me to buy a mouthguard in a sport shop because it is much cheaper than a gum shield. I went to the sport shop and bought 2 mouthguards. I hoped that it could help me. After I arrived home, I took them out from the packages and put them in hot water, then tried to wear it. Oh my god! I had no idea what I should say. I could not even close my mouth and it was very difficult to breath. How do I sleep while having mouthguards in my mouth?

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How do I sleep like that?

Today, I got up and felt like I had something in my mouth. It was soft and tender. I used a tissue paper to take it out and found that it was a blood clot and some blood. My tongue also felt sore. Oh! I must have bitten my tongue while sleeping again! My mother told me that I always grind my teeth while sleeping when I'm very stressed. Sometimes, I bite my tongue by accident, but this time it must've been a very strong bite as I never had bleeding like this before. I went to the city centre to buy something to protect my tongue. A shop assistant at a pharmacy advised me to buy a mouthguard from a sports shop because it is much cheaper than a gum shield. I went to the sports shop and bought 2 mouthguards. I hoped that they could help me. After I arrived home, I took them out from the packaging and put them in hot water, then tried to wear them. Oh my god! I had no idea what to say. I could not even close my mouth and it was very difficult to breathe. How do I sleep while having a mouthguard in my mouth?


Nice work. Your writing is quite good so there's not that many corrections.

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Thank you ^_^.
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How do I sleep like that?

Today, I got up and felt like I had something in my mouth. It was soft and tender. I used a tissue paper to take it out and found out that it was a blood clot and some blood. I also felt pain around the tip of sore at my tongue. Oh! I must have bitten my own tongue again  during my sleep /when while I was sleeping!  again!. My mother told me that I always grind my teeth when I am asleep, especially when I was feeling stressed earlier. while sleeping if I was very stressed. Sometimes, I do bite my tongue by accident, but this time, I think I might have be very strong bitten it rather strongly, as I never had any bleeding before. I went to the city centre to buy something to protect my tongue. A shop assistance at a pharmacy advised me to buy a mouth guard from in a sport shop instead, because it is much cheaper there than a gum shield, which the pharmacy sells.  I went to a the sport shop and bought 2 mouth guards. I had earlier hoped that they would be of some help . could help me. But, after I arrived home, when I had taken them out from their packaging and put them in hot water and started to wear them, ... Oh my god! I had no idea what to say. I should say. I could not even close my mouth, and it was very difficult for me to breath. How do can I sleep when I have these while having mouth guards in my mouth?

Please check  "When vs While" on the Internet.

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Your narration is really good. I liked the way you presented your story.

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