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Childhood I miss my childhood, I miss watching the leaves fell from trees, I miss growing flowers with my grandparents, and I miss playing with my cousin who lived just a few metres away from my door. But now, I am stuck in my room dealing with homework, I can even use my textbooks to build a hill. When I was in kindergarten, my parents built another house in another town for my grandparents, and they took me away since I was the only grandchild in the family. Well, at first I had no friends, then my grandfather took me to my cousin, we got along very well. I remember I was the protective elder. He always told me my neighbour next door always bully him, so everytime I passed their door, I would always glare at her, which I thought I was very brave lol. But I never thought that the little girl would be my classmate and best friend in the future. I was having a great time, I enjoyed staying with my grandparents, I helped my grandmother do some housework, and grew flowers with my grandfather. I didn't miss my parents at all, they were like strangers to me. When they took me to visit my parents, I could barely say a word to them. I was too shy to do that. But my grandfather sometimes got drunk. He loved drinking and smoking. And everytime he was drunk, he would have a fight with my grandmother, I just had to watch it in the corner, watch my grandmother crying over and over again. Luckily, he stops drinking and smoking now. Unfortunately, he does that only because he can't, he has esophagus cancer now. Well that was my childhood. I know I am pretty lame at writing :(

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Childhood

I miss my childhood, I miss watching the leaves fell fall from the trees, I miss growing flowers with my grandparents, and I miss playing with my cousin who lived just a few metres away from my door.

But now, I am stuck in my room dealing with homework, I can even use my textbooks to build a hill. I don't understand this.

When I was in kindergarten, my parents built another a house in another town for my grandparents, and they took me away since I was the only grandchild in the family.

Well, at first I had no friends, then my grandfather took me to my cousin, we got along very well. I remember I was the protective elder. He always told me my neighbour next door always bully bullied him, so every time I passed their door, I would always glare at her, which I thought I was very brave lol. But I never thought that the little girl would be my classmate and best friend in the future.

I was having had a great time, I enjoyed staying with my grandparents, I helped my grandmother do some housework, and grew flowers with my grandfather. I didn't miss my parents at all, they were like strangers to me. When they took me to visit my parents, I could barely say a word to them. I was too shy to do that.

But My grandfather sometimes got drunk. He loved drinking and smoking. And every time he was drunk, he would have a fight with my grandmother, I just had to watch it in the corner, watch my grandmother crying over and over again. Luckily, He has stopped stops drinking and smoking now. Unfortunately, he does did that only because he can't, he has esophagus esophageal cancer now.

Well that was my childhood. I know I am pretty lame at writing :(  Your writing is very good!!  :-)
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Childhood

I miss my childhood, I miss watching the leaves falling/fall from trees, I miss growing flowers with my grandparents, and I miss playing with my cousin who lived just a few metres away.

But now, I am stuck in my room doing homework, I can even use my textbooks to build a hill.

When I was in kindergarten, my parents built another house in another town for my grandparents, and they took me away since I was the only grandchild in the family.

Well, at first I had no friends, then my grandfather took me to my cousin and we got along very well. I remember I was his older protector. He always told me my neighbour next door bullied him, so every time I passed their door, I would always glare at her, which I thought I was very brave lol. But I never thought that the little girl would be my classmate and best friend in the future.

I was having a great time, I enjoyed staying with my grandparents, I helped my grandmother do some housework, and grew flowers with my grandfather. I didn't miss my parents at all, they were like strangers to me. When they took me to visit my parents, I could barely say a word to them. I was too shy to do that.

But my grandfather sometimes got drunk. He loved drinking and smoking. And every time he was drunk, he would have a fight with my grandmother. I just had to watch it from the corner, watch my grandmother crying over and over again. Luckily, he has stopped drinking and smoking now. Unfortunately, he does that only because he can't; he now has oesophagus cancer.

Well that was my childhood. I didn't know I am pretty good at writing :)

Very well written!

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