A few sentences about poem "The Road Not Taken"
I was totally amazed by the poem of Robert Frost. This poem is not as much about the difficulty of making a choice as how much the choice may change the whole future. In particular, how people see their future if they had chosen another road. I think that the poem is so often discussed because everyone sees something personal in it. The author left some translucency. Though he expressed his idea very specifically. I see the title of this poem as itscontinuation. What if... What if the road I didn't choose was the right one... And of course only you can imagine any reason for why you had chosen the particular road. Was it really the one less traveled by?
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A few sentences about the poem "The Road Not Taken"
I was (totally)* amazed by the poem of Robert Frost. This poem is not as so much about the difficulty of making a choice, as about how much [the]/that choice may change [the]/our whole future. In particular, how people see their future if they had chosen another road.I think that the poem is so often discussed because everyone sees something personal in it. The author left some [translucency]*/ambiguity, *though he expressed his idea very specifically. I see the title of this poem as its continuation. What if... what if the road I didn't choose was the right one... *and of course only you know/[can imagine] any the reason that for why you had chosen the that particular road. Was it really the one "less traveled" (by) ?
Thank you for your attention
* used in casual speaking, but not really appropriate in a report
* I'm not sure that 'translucency' is the right word here
* don't start a sentence with 'though' or 'and'
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A few sentences about poem "The Road Not Taken"
I was totally amazed by the poem of Robert Frost. This poem is not as so much about the difficulty of making a choice as how much the choice may change the whole future. In particular, how people see their future if they had chosen another road. I think that the poem is so often discussed because everyone sees something personal in it. The author left some translucency. Though he expressed his idea very specifically. I see the title of this poem as its continuation. What if... What if the road I didn't choose was the right one... And of course only you can imagine any reason for why you had chosen the particular road. Was it really the one less travelled by?Thank you for your attention
Your English is excellent and very sophisticated.
comparison ..... so xxxx as yyyy e.g. "not so much about one thing as another"
Also "This road is well-travelled whereas that road is less travelled" - the use of a hyphen - between well/less and travelled is debatable - IMHO you could write either.
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Thank you very much!!
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I don't get that poem. could you interpret it for me?
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Excellent writing! I only saw one small mistake.
"Though he expressed his idea very specifically." This is a sentence fragment. Just replace the period after the word "translucency" with a comma. Great job!
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