最近不舒服
上个周末我跟朋友一起出去玩儿。因为开初天气特别好，所以我没带大衣。我们看了电影，然好天气从凉快变成了很冷。 上个星期一我一起床就觉得不舒服。我流鼻涕，咳嗽，嗓子也痛。我给朋友打电话，他带我去看医生。医生说我感冒了。他开了感冒药，告诉我喝多水，休息在家两天。
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最近不舒服
上个周末我跟朋友一起出去玩儿。因为开希望你快点好起来 ^_^
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最近不舒服
上个周末我跟朋友一起出去玩儿。因为开初始天气特别好，所以我没带大衣。我们看了电影，然
后天气从凉快变成了突然变得很冷。 上个（Chinese doesn't emphasize on tense as much as English. As you wrote before, 上个周末，this sentence indicates a past tense, and here you don't need to say it again. The reader will understand that you want to say last Monday）星期一我一起床就觉得不舒服。，我流鼻涕，咳嗽，嗓子也痛。我给朋友打电话，他带我去看医生。医生说我感冒了。，他给我开了感冒药，并告诉我要多喝多水，休息在家休息两天。
Kris, this is wonderful Chinese. I just corrected some sentences to make them more native. Good luck.O(∩_∩)O~
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最近不舒服
上个周末我跟朋友一起出去玩儿。因为开初天气特别好，所以我没带大衣。我们看了电影，然好天气从凉快变成了很冷。 上个星期一我一起床就觉得不舒服。我流鼻涕，、咳嗽、嗓子也痛。我给朋友打电话，他带我去看医生。医生说我感冒了。他开了感冒药，告诉我喝多水，休息在家在家休息两天。Well done! Almost no mistakes! Keep going!☺️
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写得非常好 基本没什么特别的错误
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