My crazy hollidays
I solved write about my hollidays, that this is a new year. In last year I lost my job and my childrens are by hollidays of school.
My first son has seven years old, He likes ride bicicle and play soccer. Sometimes He likes building LEGO or watch TV, while I make food for lunch.
My second son has two and half years old, and He likes ride bicicle and play soccer too. He likes building LEGO too and likes draw in a paper (only scrabbles).
In the afternoon, We go to swinpool, where they like play and swim.
When I think is ok, they solve meke a mess, and I get angry! Therefore I calm down and come back to my tasks.
Well. Now I go make a coffee, to get a relax moment, I hope.
Thanks for all.
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My crazy holidays
I am writing about my holidays and that this is a new year. Last year I lost my job and my children are on holiday from school.My first son is seven years old, He likes riding his bicycle and play soccer. Sometimes he likes building LEGO or watching TV while I make food for lunch.
My second son is two and half years old, and he likes riding his bicycle and play soccer too. He likes building LEGO too and likes drawing on paper (only scribbles).
In the afternoon, We go to the swimming pool, where they like to play and swim.
When I think it is ok, they make a mess, and I get angry! Therefore I calm down and get back to my tasks.
Well. Now I'm going to make a coffee and relax for a moment, I hope.
Thanks for all.
Hello Felipe,
Children do like making a mess when they get the chance. Mine are the same.
Just a few corrections, some of them repeated. You can either say 'I like + verb-ing' or 'I like to + verb'. The first is more common in British English and the second in American English.
I hope things get better for you in 2017
Bob
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