Diary Entry for January 3rd
In order to celebrate the new year，all of my roommates decided to have a meal outside. There were six girls and had six different loved flavors. For example，I love spicy food but one of my roommates hates it，she will get pimples on her face of she eats spicy food. Therefore，it's difficult to coordinate everyone's taste. Finally we decided to go to a Korean restaurant.
It seems the most classical food in Korea is the Korean Barbecue. So we ordered it at the restaurant. Barbecue is delicious but it is hard to roast. It was so lucky because we had a experienced roomamate who is good at roasting meat and vegetables.
In all，we had a joyful lunch yesterday！
Happy New Year，guys！
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Diary Entry for January 3rd
In order to To celebrate the new year，all of my roommates and I decided to go out to eat have a meal outside. There were six girls with and had six different preferences loved flavors. For example，I love spicy food but one of my roommates hates it， because she will get pimples on her face of if she eats spicy food. Therefore，it's difficult to coordinate accommodate everyone's tastes. Finally we decided to go to a Korean restaurant.It seems the most classical popular/traditional? food in Korea is the Korean Barbecue. So, so we ordered it at the restaurant. Barbecue is delicious but it is hard to roast. It was so lucky because Luckily, we had an experienced roomamate roommate who is good at roasting meat and vegetables.
In all，we had a joyful lunch yesterday！
Happy New Year，guys！
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Diary Entry for January 3rd
In order to celebrate the new year, all of my roommates and I decided to have go out for a meal outside. There were six girls and they each had six different favourites flavors. For example, I love spicy food but one of my roommates hates it since she will get pimples on her face if she eats spicy food. Therefore, it's difficult to accommodate towards everyone's tastes. Finally, we decided to go to a Korean restaurant.It seems that/like the most classical food in Korea is the Korean barbecue, so we ordered it at the restaurant. Barbecue is delicious, but it is hard to roast. I was so lucky because we had an experienced roommate who is good at roasting meat and vegetables.
Overall/In all, we had a joyful lunch yesterday！
Happy New Year, guys！
Hi Dahlia,
Great job! You are getting better at writing each and every day.
What a good idea to celebrate with the girls. I agree, it gets difficult to accommodate towards everyone's food preferences the larger the group is. I'm very glad to hear that your lunch was ultimately a success!
Sincerely,
Sara
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A couple ideas:
"...to have a meal outside" In this context, you might consider saying "...to go out." This phrase is nice when you are saying that you are going to a restaurant or a movie (something outside of your house). When you say you are "having a meal outside", it could be understood that you are eating outdoors, like in a park or an outdoor restaurant.
"It seems the most classical food in Korea is the Korean Barbecue. So we ordered it at the restaurant." I would write this as "It seems the most classical food in Korea is the Korean Barbecue, so we ordered it at the restaurant." You could also keep it as two sentences by saying "It seems the most classical food in Korea is the Korean Barbecue. Because of this, we decided to order it."
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