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A fighter Ann is a famous dancer director, who has choreographed consistently for thirty years in internationally. When she was young, the discrimination of women is ingrained. People thinks that women should avoid working in places which are too public. Naturally, dance in the spotlight was verboten. In that case, Ann with her some friends conspired against the custom. Ann wore male’s costume to gloss over her female identity. At one day, when they answered a curtain call, she pulled off the headgear. everyone shocked. Audience sang and talked with gusto and immediately turned angry. Late, company dismissed her, and she lost fix income. Days became hard. She mashed greens from market which were people abandoned or nibbled at pilot biscuits. After a few years struggled, she got a chance to go aboard. Luckily, her consummate skill was recognized by the local soon and build high reputation. From then on, she contributed to promote the equal of gender. Many years later, she was imparted that her homeland solicited he back and people were guilt-ridden about past. In the hub of town, a new theatre was build and some young dancer was rehearsing a dance which was to tribute the fighter of equality. In speech she said we are fare better than before and we need improve more.

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A fighter

Ann is a famous dancer director, who has choreographed consistently for thirty years in internationally.
When she was young, the discrimination of women is was ingrained. People thinks thought that women should avoid working in places which are were too public. Naturally, dance/dancing in the spotlight was verboten. In that case, Ann, with some of her some friends conspired against the custom. Ann wore a male’s costume to gloss over her female identity. At one day, when they answered a curtain call, she pulled off the headgear and everyone was shocked. The audience sang and talked with gusto and immediately turned angry. Later, the company dismissed her, and she lost her fixed income. Days became hard. She mashed greens from the market which were people abandoned or nibbled at on pilot biscuits. After a few years struggled After a few years struggling/After a few years of struggle/After she struggled for a few years, she got a chance to go aboard abroad. Luckily, her consummate skill was recognized by the locals soon and she built a high/strong reputation. From then on, she contributed to promote the equality of gender.
Many years later, she was imparted that her homeland solicited her back and people were guilt-ridden about her past. In the hub of town, a new theatre was built and some young dancers was were rehearsing a dance which was to tribute the fighters of equality. In her speech she said we are far better than before and we need to improve more.

Good practice writing. Just be careful with your use of the past tense. Good luck! - Jason

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