请帮一下我翻译这几句话

请看一下我的翻译是不是对的。。谢谢大家！

Can you see the stars from your window?
你从你的窗户看出来，可以看到星星吗？
你能透过窗户看到星星吗？
It's your turn to take a card! (when playing a card game)
换你抽牌！
该你摸牌（了）！
Please clean the table. (like take the dishes into the kitchen and wipe the table)
请净一净桌面。

请清理（打扫）一下桌面。

This flat was just renovated last year.
这个公寓是去年才装修了。

这个公寓是去年才装修的  

请帮一下我翻译这几句话

请看一下我的翻译是不是对的。。谢谢大家！

Can you see the stars from your window?
你从你的窗户看出来，可以看到星星吗？

It's your turn to take a card! (when playing a card game)
换你抽牌！

Please clean the table. (like take the dishes into the kitchen and wipe the table)
请净一净桌面。（请收拾一下桌子）

This flat was just renovated last year.
这个公寓是去年才装修了（的）。

Can you see the stars from your window?
你从你的窗户看出来，可以看到星星吗？    往窗外看/从窗户看出去

It's your turn to take a card! (when playing a card game)
换你抽牌！（也有说摸牌的）

Please clean the table. (like take the dishes into the kitchen and wipe the table)
请净一净桌面。      擦桌子/把桌面清理干净

This flat was just renovated last year.
这个公寓是去年才装修了。    是去年才装修的/ 去年才装修了

你翻译的大多数内容是正确的，但是有些表达不太地道，我帮你修改了一下。

Can you see the stars from your window?
你从你的窗户看出来那里，可以看到星星吗？

It's your turn to take a card! (when playing a card game)
换（该）你抽抓牌！

小贴士：动词“该“更口语化。

Please clean the table. (like take the dishes into the kitchen and wipe the table)
请净一净清一清桌面（台面）。

This flat was just renovated last year.
这个公寓是去年才装修了的。

虽然我帮你修改了一些，但是你翻译的真得很好，我能看出你的汉语水平很高，加油！！