Cute Tragedy
I watched Bay Max which is the desney movie because my son wanted to watch it.Though I had not been interested in the movie,it was interesting for me too.
It was very good until we finished to watch it.
But after that,tragedy happened.
my son want me to do this make-believe play all day,and every day.
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Cute Tragedy
I watched Bay Max which is the desney Disney (proper nouns - names - begin with capital letter)movie because my son wanted to watch it. Though I had not been interested in the movie, it was interesting for me too.It was very good until we finished to watch watching it.
But after that, tragedy happened.
My son want me to do this make-believe play all day, and every day.
Don't forget to put spaces between words, phrases and sentences - maybe these were just typos?
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Cute Tragedy
I watched Bay Max, which is a Disney movie, because my son wanted to watch it.Though I wasn't interested in watching the movie, it was interesting for me, too.It was very good until we finished to watched the ending.
But after that In the end, tragedy happened struck. <--You can also use "happened" if you want, but "struck" sounds more natural to me.
My son wants me to do this make-believe play all day, and every day.
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