The New Year

2016 will go and 2017 will come. On New Year's Eve, our family will have dinner together. I think that the atmosphere will be good then since we are usually very busy and cannot spend much time together.
Above all, I want to thank my parents for everything this holiday season. I am only children in my family and I know that they sacrificed a lot on my behalf, especially my mother. She has already retired, but she still cooks for my father and me. A mother’s position is very important in China. So, I want to express my best wishes to her from me. In the new year, I hope that I can get along with everyon, and I want to wish everyone a healthy and peaceful life. Let's look forward to the New Year! 

Hi Caiyulin! Yes, I think that we all of us are looking ahead to 2017. As to the English, titles should be capitalized (the main or important words) and there is no space between the last letter and the punctuation mark (e.g. I am done. = OK; I am done . = NOT OK). Try for balance or symmetry in your choice of words and usage (e.g. Die/be born, end/begin, stop/start, etc.) I reworded and rearranged a few of your sentences to make them sound more natural, but hope that I kept your ideas intact. Apologies, if I did not do so. I hope that this helps you. Best wishes for 2017! J.