My memoable memories Today, I will tell you about a My memoable memories. That is times my wife born my son. That day is July 23, 2015 As another days, I went to work-place at 8.00 AM, When I arrived

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My memoable memories Today, I will tell you about a My memoable memories. That is times my wife born my son. That day is July 23, 2015 As another days, I went to work-place at 8.00 AM, When I arrived my work-place, I received a call of my wife that her being labor I ran hurry to hospital, On road, I was extremaly nervous, When I came and seen her still healthy, I felt verry happy, All that day, I was beside her, That night, She being felt pained, I was non-sleeping to share pained with her, Until 5.00 AM, She going to Delivery room. After thirty minutes, I haven't any news, At that times. I felt most of nervous, A moment late, a Doctor step out and told me " Your wife and son were safe" Moments, I felt very very very joyous and happy. At that moment is 5.45 AM July 24, 2015 And I became Dad, Thanks you for reading my notebook

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My memorable memory

Today, I will tell you about my memorable memory.
That was the time when my wife born my son.
That day is July 23, 2015
Like other days, I went to work-place at 8.00 AM,
When I arrived there, I received a call of my wife that she was being in the labor
I ran very quickly to the hospital. On the road, I was extremely nervous,
When I arrived , she was looking healthy, I felt very happy,
All day along, I was beside her,
At that night, she started to feel pained,
I was non-sleeping to share the pain with her,
Until 5.00 AM, she went to the delivery room.
After thirty minutes, there was no news,
At that time. I felt very nervous,
Then, a doctor stepped out and told me " Your wife and son were safe"
At that moment, I felt very very very joyous and happy. It was 5.45 AM on July 24, 2015
And I became a Dad,
Thank you for reading my notebook

Em rất thích bài viết này của anh. Nhưng anh nhớ nhé, bài này lặp at that moment, at that time lặp một cách quá thể đáng >'<

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