Diary Entry for December 28th
Today I had lunch with one of my friend to see her off. Because she will return home tomorrow. We chose a newly open restaurant. The restaurant specizes Shanxi dishes，a famous kind of Chinese food.
The most famous food in Shanxi dishes is Rouga Mo and noodles. Today we specially ordered two Rouga Mo. It is also called “Chinese hamburger”，so you may imagine its shape. It is a kind of cooked wheaten food and cook easily，only you prepare well the materials：marinated meat and a baked bun. All you need to do is put the marinated meat into the baked bun. The key factor of making it delicious is the marinated meat.
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Diary Entry for December 28th
Today I had lunch with one of my friends to see her off because she will return home tomorrow. We chose a newly opened restaurant. The restaurant specializes in Shanxi dishes, a famous kind of Chinese food.The most famous Shanxi dishes is called Rouga Mo and noodles. Today we specially ordered two Rouga Mo. It is also called “Chinese hamburger," so you can imagine its shape. It's a kind of cooked wheaten food and is easily cooked, easily, only you prepare well the following ingredients (well) ahead of time: marinated meat and a baked bun. All you need to do is put the marinated meat into the baked bun. The key factor in making it delicious is the marinated meat.
Hi there!
Good job! I wonder if I can make a vegan variation of this at home :)
"... one of my friends..."
The word "friend" should be plural here since it's one of a bunch.
E.g. "One of my sisters..."
"Two of my kids..."
"specializes in Shanxi dishes..."
When we say that a restaurant specializes in something, we generally say "specializes in."
"... so you can/might imagine.."
Sounds more natural than saying "may."
E.g. "As you might imagine, ..."
"So you can easily picture the scenario..."
"...kind of cooked wheaten food and is easily cooked ..."
You don't need to say "cooked" twice so I've removed the first of the two.
Excellent job!
Sincerely,
Sara
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Diary Entry for December 28th
Today I had lunch with one of my friends to see her off because she will return home tomorrow. We chose a newly opened restaurant. The restaurant specizes Shanxi dishes，a famous kind of Chinese food.The most famous type of Shanxi dishes is Rouga Mo and noodles. Today we ordered two Rouga Mo. The dish is also called “Chinese hamburger”，so you can imagine its shape. It is a kind of cooked wheaten food and is easy to cook, you only need to carefully prepare the materials：marinated meat and a baked bun. All you need to do is put the marinated meat into the baked bun. The key factor in making it delicious is the marinated meat.
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