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days in XIANG YANG
I went to XIANGYANG to travel with my friends last month. We went to the GU LONG ZHONG. It was famous because of the story of " three visits to the hut" in the three kingdoms period. At first, i thought it must be like a park. But when we came to a high mountain, i knew i had wore the wrong clothes and boots. Although we were very tired, but we got to the top of the mountain, and the view was wonderful. And we came down by the slideway, it's so excited. Then we went to the museum and the old wall of XIANG YANG.The second day, we went to the construction of TANG dynasty. it was built for a movie that a story happened in TANG dynasty. I liked there, but I didn't like the fog. because of it, i couldn't take clear photos.correction:
I went to XIANGYANG to travel with my friends last month. We went to the GU LONG ZHONG. It is famous because of the story "three visits to the hut" from the Three Kingdoms period. At first, I thought it must be like a park, but when we came to a high mountain, i knew i had worn the wrong clothes and boots. Although we were very tired, we got to the top of the mountain, and the view was wonderful. Then, we came down by the ("slideway" is a very uncommon word, and most English speakers do not know it. Try using "steep slope" or "landslide area" or something), It was so exciting. Then we went to the museum and the old wall of XIANG YANG. On the second day, we went to (do you mean "a building from the Tang Dynasty"?). It was built for a movie (do you mean "about a story from the Tang Dynasty"). I liked it there, but I didn't like the fog. Because of it, I couldn't take clear photos.
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