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Extract from The hobbit "Revenge!" the dragon said, and the light of his eyes shined the whole hall from floor to ceiling. "Revenge! The king under the montain has died, where are descendant who are looking for revenge? Girion, Lord of Valley, has died, and I ate his people like a wolf hidden between sheeps, where are the sons of his sons who has the brave to come here? I kill where I want and no one can stop me. I fighted against old warriors and now there isn't anyone like me. At that time I was young and sweet but now I and old and strong! Strong, strong, thief in the shadows! " he screamed and looked at Bilbo with evilness "My armor is like ten shields, my teeth are swords, my claws are lances, my tail is a lightning, my wings are a huracan and my breath is death!"

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Extract from The hobbit

"Revenge!" the dragon said, and the light of his eyes lit the whole hall from floor to ceiling. "Revenge! The king under the mountain has died. Where are his/the? descendants who are looking for revenge? Girion, Lord of the Valley, has died, and I ate his people like a wolf hid among sheep. Where are the sons of his sons who are brave enough to come here? I kill where* I want and no one can stop me. I fought against old warriors and now there isn't anyone like me. At that time I was young and sweet but now I am old and strong! Strong, strong, thief in the shadows! " he screamed and looked evilly at Bilbo "My armor is like ten shields, my teeth are swords, my claws are lances, my tail is lightning, my wings are a hurricane and my breath is death!"

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Very well written!

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