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Christmas day “Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells, jingle all the way…….” Christmas is just around the corner, Christmas day is on December 25, people around the world celebrate the birth of Jesus Christ. Some people celebrate by giving gifts. Children may be thanking Santa Claus for new toys. They may also be going to church with their families. All the people always decorate a Christmas tree and sing and dance at home on Christmas day. In China, Chinese young people are also gald to celebrate, they’ll go shopping in the mall, or they are going to travel. The point is that there are fewer holidays in China. They are enjoy vacation

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Christmas day

“Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells, jingle all the way…….” Christmas is just around the corner, Christmas day is on December 25, and people all around the world celebrate the birth of Jesus Christ. Some people celebrate by giving gifts. Children might thank Santa Claus for new toys. They may also go to church with their families. All the people decorate a Christmas tree and sing and dance at home on Christmas day.
In China, young chinese people are also glad to celebrate, they’ll go shopping in the mall, or they will travel. The point is that there are fewer holidays in China, so they enjoy the vacation.


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Christmas day

“Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells, jingle all the way…….” Christmas is just around the corner, Christmas day is on December 25. People around the world will (talking about an event in the future) celebrate the birth of Jesus Christ. Some people celebrate by giving gifts. Children may be thanking Santa Claus for new toys. They may also be going to church with their families. Everybody (everybody always sounds better) always decorates a Christmas tree, sing songs and dance at home on Christmas day. (dancing and singing arent so common, usually drinking and eating ha)
In China, Chinese young people are also gald to celebrate, they’ll go shopping in the mall, or go travelling. The point is that there are fewer holidays in China. They are enjoy vacation  Because there are fewer holidays in China people enjoy the extra opportunity to celebrate. (is this what you mean?)


好了除了很小错

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