Improving the quality of medical services in the policlinic
Alas, in our time, according to statistics, a very large percentage of oncology and cardiovascular diseases. For anybody not a secret that medical services are very expensive. In the chemist's shop, unfortunately, buying medicines will cost more than to go to a regular grocery store. So it is easier and cheaper to prevent disease than to treat it. I would like to add that exist a large number of programs in health care and the state allocates large funds for the prevention of diseases. In this regard, appearing new innovative devices, which makes our defense industry. Therefore, should not rely on russian avos, and follows go through and check the state of health of the organism.
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Improving the quality of medical services in the policlinic
Alas, in our time, according to statistics, there is a very large percentage occurrence of oncological and cardiovascular diseases, but or anybody not a secret is no secret that medical services are very expensive. Unfortunately, buying medicine will costs more at the chemist's shop pharmacy than goto at a regular grocery store. So, it is easier and cheaper to prevent disease than it is to treat it. I would like to add that exist a large number of health care programs exist and the state allocates large funds for the prevention of diseases. In this regard, appearing new innovative devices, which will improve our strategies to defend against disease* makes our defense industry are appearing.
[Therefore, we should not rely on russian avos, and follows go through and check the state of health of the organism.] This final sentence doesn't make much sense.
* I changed these words to make your message clearer.
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Maria, if you still come to italki and still care about your post of last December, I assume that your reference to Russian "avos" refers to авось. If so, you could write the last sentence as follows:
Therefore, should not rely on Russian "avos'", which means chance, and follow through and check the state of your health.
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Improving the quality of medical services in the policlinic
Alas, in our time, according to statistics, there is very large proportion of oncology and cardiovascular diseases. As is well known, medical services are very expensive. At the pharmacy, unfortunately, medicines cost more than at the grocer's. So it is easier and cheaper to prevent disease than to treat it. I would like to add that there are many programs in health care and that the state allocates large funds to prevent diseases. From this money come novel devices, which make our health indusrty. (Therefore, should not rely on russian avos, and follows go through and check the state of health of the organism.?)very well written but a bit obscure.
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Well done !
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