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LingYu
A new connection As these weekends full of activities, I feel full of life.And my friends were moving to the place I lived for work.So we have more chances can meet up and hang out together. I used to be alone sometimes or with my family more. But It's better than alone while I am with my good friends. It's seems like we are back to the time during the University. We all like the free trip with uncertainty plane and always have adventurous spirit to face any excited and unexpected situation. My heat fulled of anxiety for a time,but I am learning be more patience to myself and the environment, too. I know I will change the way but slowly and the door opened when you become inclusive and equal to everything. A kind of wormy time with my friends and family 's love.Then I can bring some courage acrossing the new year. *Merry Christmas (This is a paper Christmas tree ,we usually played in childhood.Pull the magic potion in then It will become this beautiful way.)

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A new connection

As these weekends are full of activities, I feel full of life.  My friends were moving moved to the place I live for work. so we have more chances where we can meet up/to meet up and hang out together. I used to be alone sometimes or with my family more. But It's better than alone while that I am with my good friends than alone. It's It seems like we are back to the time during the University. We all like the free trips with uncertainty plane to an uncertain place and we always have adventurous spirits to face any excited and unexpected situation. My heart filled fills of with anxiety for a time, but I am learning to be more patient to with myself and the environment, too. I know I will change the my way but slowly and the door opens when you become inclusive and equal to everything. It's a kind of wormy warm time with my friends and family 's love. Then I can bring some courage crossing into the new year. *Merry Christmas (This is a paper Christmas tree ,we usually played with in our childhood. Pull the magic potion in and then it will become this beautiful way tree.)

Hi LingYu, it's great that you are practicing! Keep writing and practicing and you will get better. I see that you are trying different ways to say different things which is great. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections, I am happy to help. - Jason

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A new connection

As these weekends have been full of activities, I feel full of life. And My friends were moved to the place I lived for work. So, we have more chances can  to meet up and hang out together. I used to be with my family more or alone sometimes. But It's better than alone while I am with my good friends. Being with my friends is better than being alone. It's seems like we are back to  the time during the University  our university days. We all like the free trip with uncertainty plane free and uncertain trips and always have adventurous spirits to face any exciting and unexpected situation. My heat is fulled of anxiety for a at times, but I am learning to be more patience to patient with myself and the environment, too. I know I will change the way but slowly. and The door opens when you become inclusive and equal to everything. It's a kinad of  wormy(This means 多蠕虫) warm time with my friends and family 's love. Then I can bring some courage acrossing into the new year. *Merry Christmas (This is a paper Christmas tree , which we usually played with in childhood. Pull Pour the magic potion in then, It will become this beautiful way like this.)

Hi Ling, just ask me if you have any more questions! 

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