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An apparition of a grandfather or ghost shown in the drawing above, shows a long scroll to his kid and advises the young man to inherit Chinese tradition culture. I was profoundly moved by what I have seen in this picture* which is so educational and instructive.
Recently, scholars, policeman, and critics of all stripes have debated the social implications of the changes due to the fading of traditional Chinese culture. Some people think this a shame, perhaps, but probably an inevitable one. But a lot of Chinese see conventional culture can wholly elevate and enhance one's self-confidence.
Fortunately, the Chinese government is starting to pay attention. And it obvious that the majority of Chinese pick up traditional culture that they lost yesterday. We can see more and more students reading The Book of Songs and Historical Records in libraries. And Deyun Communist, which presents superb productions of cross-talks, has broken attendance records for many years in a row.
As a Chinese, what we ought to do is transmit Chinese traditional culture from generation to generation.

*or, I was profoundly moved by what I saw in this picture ...

Very well written!

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I cannot you correct your essay because so many spelling errors that I cannot figure out what you want to say. Depending on mechanical translators for sentences is never good. 最好有份中文水版 :)

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