Diary Entry for December 20th
Yesterday I went to downtown for meeting my friend. I had not seen her for about half a year. Now she is working in New Oriental English,which is a famous language training school.
She is a special girl and has a sharp differences with me. For example,she always very cool. The cool is from head to toe,inside and out. She went skateboarding to meet me yesterday. There were so many passengers stared at her!It was so cool!
We ate spaghetti at noon,because she had planned to practice skateboarding with her American friend.
I think we should make some friends who have different characteristics!It's so funny!
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Diary Entry for December 20th
Yesterday I went to downtown for meeting to meet my friend. I hadn't seen her for about half a year. Now she is working in at New Oriental English, which is a famous language training school.She is a special girl and has a sharp differences with me. For example, she's always very cold. The cold is from head to toe, inside and out. She skateboarded to meet me yesterday. There were so many passengers who stared at her! It was so cool!
We ate spaghetti at noon because she had planned to practice skateboarding with her American friend.
I think we should make some friends who have different characteristics from us It's so funny!
Hi there!
Very good job! Only a couple of minor mistakes and some suggestions.
Keep up the good work!
Sara
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Diary Entry for December 20th
Yesterday I went to downtown for meeting to meet my friend. I had not seen her for about half a year. Now she is working in at New Oriental English, which is a famous language training school.She is a special girl and has a sharp differences with different from me. For example, she always very cool. The cool is from head to toe, inside and out. She went skateboarding to meet me yesterday. There were so many passengers who stared at her! It was so cool!
We ate spaghetti at noon, because she had planned to practice skateboarding with her American friend.
I think we should make some friends who have different characteristics!It's so funny!
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