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Sunday (is there kind someone to correct me? Sunday I got up at 6:30 a.am as usual on Weekends; Firstly, I went for a walk with my dog and then I had breakfast, a black coffee and two toasts. I had met with my friends to training (running) at 9 am; in the meantime, I was studying English It was windy and cold day. The work out was great, we ran 15 (fifteen) km at 4:10 per km. Then, I came back to home and I had a shower, I got dressed and about 12.30 a.m., I went to downtown for a walk with my girlfriend, my friend and his two daughters To be continued….

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Sunday (is there kind someone to correct me? Is there someone kind enough to correct me?

Sunday
I got up at 6:30 a.a.m. as usual on Weekends; (Or: I got up at 6:30 a.m. as I usually do on weekends.) Firstly (firstly is too formal here), I went for a walk with my dog and then I had breakfast, a black coffee and two toasts. I had met with my friends to go training (running) at 9 a.m. In the meantime, I was studying English.
It was a windy and cold day. The workout was great. We ran 15 (fifteen) km at 4:10 per km 4.2 min/km. Then, I came back to home and I had a shower. I got dressed and at about 12:30 a.m., I went to downtown for a walk with my girlfriend, my friend, and his two daughters.
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Sunday (is there kind someone to correct me?

Sunday
I got up at 6:30 am as usual at weekends; Firstly, I went for a walk with my dog and then I had breakfast, a black coffee and two pieces of toast. I  met with my friends to train (running) at 9 am; in the meantime, I was studying English.
It was a windy and cold day. The workout was great: we ran 15 (fifteen) km at 4:10 per km. Then, I came back  home and I had a shower, I got dressed and about 12.30 a.m., I went  downtown for a walk with my girlfriend, my friend and his two daughters.
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Is there a kind someone to correct me? < This sounds more formal

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Is there someone kind enough to correct me?

Sunday


I got up at 6:30 a.am as I usually do on Weekends. Firstly, I went for a walk with my dog and then I had breakfast, a black coffee and two pieces of toasts. I had met with my friends to training (running) at 9 am; in the meantime, Afterwards / Before this I was studying studied English
It was a windy and cold, windy day. The work out was great, we ran 15 (fifteen) km at 4:10 per km. Then, I came back to home and I had a shower, I got dressed and at about 12.30 a.m., I went to downtown for a walk with my girlfriend, my friend and his two daughters
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Sunday (is there someone kind to correct this text for me?

Sunday
I got up at 6:30 a.am as usual on Weekends; Firstly, I went for a walk with my dog and then I had breakfast, a black coffee and two toasts. I had met with my friends to training (running) at 9 am; in the meantime, I was studying English
It was windy and cold day. The work out was great, we ran 15 (fifteen) km at 4:10 per km. Then, I came back to home and I had a shower, I got dressed and about 12.30 a.m., I went to downtown for a walk with my girlfriend, my friend and his two daughters
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MY VERSION

Sunday

I got up at 6:30 am as I usually do on weekends, then I went for a walk with my dog. After that I had my breakfast which consisted of a black coffee and two pieces of toast. My friends and I got together to go training(running) at 9 am. It is worth mentioning that I studied English while I waited for my friends to show up.

It was a windy and cold day. The workout was great. We ran 9 miles at 6´36” per mile. Then, I came back home and had a shower. I got dressed and at about 12:30 pm I went downtown for a walk with my girlfriend, another friend and his two daughters.

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