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First notebook entry ever 我是中文学生. 上个月我开始学中文,很喜欢,但是很难。 汉字很漂亮. 前年我去中国, 两个星期度过。 明年我要回中国,是故我在学习中文。

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我是学中文的学生。 上个月我开始学中文,很喜欢,但是很难(this is absolutely fine in spoken Chinese, but in writing, it is better to say 我很喜欢但是我觉得很难 for you to pass exams )。 汉字很漂亮。 前年我在中国待了两个星期。

明年我还要去中国,所以我在学习中文。

well done! this is a huge achievement since you have learned Chinese for such a short time. just pay attention to the difference between Chinese period and the English one. "回" means you want to go back because you originally lived in China or have lived in China for a long time, so it is not proper to be used here. you can say i will go again ("还要去"). "是故” is a very old way of saying "所以“/”因此". we don't use it quite often now: never in spoken Chinese and seldom in written. Hope your Chinese will be better and better. Thanks.

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First notebook entry ever


我是一名正在学习中文的学生。我是从上个月开始学习中文的,尽管中文很难,但是我很喜欢它。汉字很美。前年我去过中国,并在那里度过了两个星期。明年我还会再去中国,因为我在学习中文。

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First notebook entry ever

我是中文学生。 上个月我开始学中文。我很喜欢,但是中文很难学。 汉字很漂亮。 前年我去了中国, 两个星期度过。
明年我要回中国去,是故因为我在学习中文。

Hi Joma! This is a solid first entry. I recommend that you install a Chinese Pinyin keyboard so that you can type out the Chinese periods (if you haven't done so already), since Chinese periods are hollow circles and not dots. Keep learning! 我们都在支持你加油!

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First notebook entry ever

我是中文学生. 上个月我开始学中文,很喜欢,但是很难。 汉字很漂亮. 前年我去中国, 两个星期度过。
明年我要回中国,是故我在学习中文。

我是一名学习中文的学生,我是上个月开始学习的(从上个月开始学习的),我很喜欢中文,但是觉得他很难。汉字很漂亮,前年我去中国,在那里度过了两个星期(在那里待了两个星期)。明年我还要回中国,所以我现在在学习中文。

The contents in the brackets is a spoken way to speck Chinese. The yellow part can be omitted.(the sentence wii be  more formal when you add it)

The little article is well-organized.I can understand it easily. 

There are two 在 in the last sentence, the first is use with 现,that means time=now.  The second means state.

If you have some things unclear, so ask me.


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