Essay: Life has improved in the last century
In the 20th Century, with the invention of the computers and the advances of the healthcare systems, the life of citizens has increased dramatically.
Firstly, people is worried about what kind of food is eating for instance, they prefer to eat fresh food from the local farms rather than products based in sugar and poor in vitamins. In addition, there are more treatments for illnesses which were mortal five decades ago.
Secondly, with the industrial revolution, the hard physical work is not necessary due to the fact that robots can do the same job without eat or sleep. Other effect of this industrial revolution is that the prices of the products has decreased constantly.
If the last century was characteristic by the lack of entertainment, nowadays there are a lot of choices to enjoy with different people. Internet is the main reponsible of this change because people can interact each other for example, to play computer games cooperating to achieve an objetive.
To conclude, with any doubt life is better today because of technology, tolerance and less mortality.
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Essay: Life has improved in the last century
During the course of the 20th Century with the invention of the computers and the advances in healthcare systems, the lives of citizens have improved increased dramatically.
??Firstly, people no longer have to worry (I can't uncross this) about what kind of food to eat for instance, they prefer to eat fresh food from the local farms rather than products based in sugar and poor in vitamins.?? In addition, there are more treatments for fatal illnesses five decades ago.
Secondly, since the Industrial Revolution, the hard physical work is no longer necessary due to the fact that robots can do the same work more efficiently without requiring food or sleep. Other effects of this industrial revolution has been that the prices of the products has constantly decreased .
If the last century was characterised by the lack of entertainment, nowadays there are a lot of choices to enjoy with different people. The internet is the main catalyst of this change because people can interact with each other for example, to play computer games cooperating to achieve an objective.
To conclude, with any doubt life is better today because of technology, tolerance and less mortality.
Look up the use of 'the' before definite/ indefinite nouns, in English it isn't the same as in Spanish.
Just on the argument: remember that there are still MANY people in many countries who still do very hard physical labour. Also remember that automatization (robots) has left many people without work. Lastly, the internet has also caused previously vibrant forms of entertainment to die out e.g. working-class theatres in the USA in the 19th/20th century.
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Essay: Life has improved in the last century
In the 20th Century, with the invention of the computers and the advances of the healthcare systems, the lifespan of citizens has increased dramatically.Firstly, people is are worried about what kind of food is they are eating. For instance, they prefer to eat fresh food from the local farms rather than products based in on sugar and poor in vitamins. In addition, there are more treatments for illnesses which were mortal five decades ago.
Secondly, with the industrial revolution, the hard, physical work is not necessary due to the fact that robots can do the same job without eating or sleeping. Another effect of this industrial revolution is that the prices of the products has decreased constantly.
If the last century was characterized by the lack of entertainment, nowadays there are a lot of choices to enjoy with different people. The internet is the main responsibility of this change because people can interact with each other for example, to by playing computer games, cooperating to achieve an objetive for example.
To conclude, without any doubt life is better today because of technology, tolerance and less mortality.
Good text Joaquín. Let me know if you have questions. - Jason
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Essay: Life has improved since last century
In the 20th Century, with the invention of the computers and the advances of the healthcare systems, the lives of citizens have extended dramatically.Firstly, people is worring about what kind of food to eat ,for instance. They prefer fresh food from the local farms to products based in sugar but poor in vitamins. In addition, there are more treatments for illnesses which were mortal five decades ago.
Secondly, because of the industrial revolution, hard physical work is not necessary due to the fact that robots can do the same job without eating and sleeping. Another effect of industrial revolution is that the prices of the products have decreased constantly.
If the last century was characteristic by the lack of entertainment, nowadays there are a lot of choices to enjoy ourselves with different people. Internet is the main cause of this change because people can interact each other, for example, to play computer games cooperating to achieve an objetive.
To conclude, with any doubt life is better today because of technology, tolerance and less mortality.
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