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My princess came to the word I think 12th November is my luck day , my princess came to the world .I don't what that feel is it ,nervous ,happy or others ,but I know I have more responsibility from now on ,I need to take care of her and I need to undertake the burden from now on . My wife told me that she feel very unfamiliar for my daughter although she always lie down in her arms,I think that's just because we just live less one month together.I always think of my single day long long ago ,but it's never again ,I told myself life is changing everyday,I should accept that ,I cann't change the past ,because it's has passed ,I need to change tomorrow . maybe this is life ,everyone is hard to escape that ,just do it .

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My princess came into the world

I think the 12th of November is my lucky day, because that's the day my princess came into the world. I don't know what that feeling is: it nervousness, happiness, or others something else, but I know I have more responsibilities from now on. I need to take care of her and I need to undertake the burden from now on.

My wife told me that she still feels very unfamiliar for holding my daughter although even though she is always doing so. lie down in her arms, I think that's just because we have only just lived together as a family of three for less than one month together.

I always think back to of my days as a single young man day long long ago, but I also keep reminding myself that it's never going to be like that again. ,I told myself Life is changing everyday, and I should accept that. I cannot change the past because it's has passed; I chan only need to change tomorrow. Maybe this is life. Everyone should realize it is hard to escape that, so just do it.


Miles, 恭喜你和你的太太!你写的很不错。请注意:在英文里,标点符号前面是没有空格的。只有开头的引号前面才会有。比如说: He said, "May I borrow your pencil?"

还有问题的话请别怕问。再次恭喜你们一家三口!

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