Introducing Myself

Hi guys! I'd like to take a quick moment to introduce myself. My name is Ngoc. I'm from Vietnam. I'm 18 years old. Now, I'm a student in Vietnam Women's Academy specializing in social work.* Hey, I have a passion for traveling and exploring. I have a lot of chances to travel around to many cities in Vietnam. Moreover, I like also learning English through song. I'm not dating anyone. I don't have a sister or a brother so I wish I would have a sibling to share my sadness or happiness. My character is obedient , sociable , dynamic and quite mysterious. I like best the saying, ''Treasure your life!''
Thank you for looking at my notebook.

Hi Ngoc! A very good job! As to the grammar, titles are capitalized, only one exclamation point (!) is needed, and periods (.) end a sentence with no space between it and the last letter. Be consistent in spelling "Vietnam."  Other than those minor things, a well-written essay. I hope that this helps you. J. *I was not sure what you were trying to write in this sentence, so if I misinterpreted it, my apologies!