A Difficult Situation in My Life

It is quite obvious that everybody has found many situations in their lives where they have had to pluck up their courage to deal with difficult situations. I am no different than anyone else. Of all the situations with which I have had to deal with, I can remember one of them which was specially cruel and painful.

Many years ago, on my 50th birthday, I was having a magnificent life--a loving wife, three wonderful children, and a good job with nice wages. I was truly enjoying a great moment in my life!  That day, however, was the chosen one for my boss to sack me.

I remember that, back then, at the beginning, I lived as if in a nightmare. As the time passed, and it was impossible to find a new job, I suffered from a strong depression. After several months of visiting a psychologist, I realized that I needed to pluck up the courage to deal with this terrible problem. My wife, my children,  and my whole extended family supported me, and at last, I was able to find a new job. Being laid-off from work was the worst moment in my life, but fortunately, it finished with a happy ending.

Thank you in advance for your review. It will be very useful for me.

Hi Javier! I, too, am glad that things ended well for you. As to the English composition, good job! I was able to understand everything that you wanted to share with me, as the reader, but took the liberty of some minor edits to make your sentences sound more natural to my native ears. Writing can also be very therapeutic, so keep posting. Stay active! Stay employed! I hope that this helps you. J.

A difficult situation in my life

It is quite obvious that everybody can find many situations in their lives where they have to pluck up with the courage to deal with difficult situations.

> It is quite normal for everyone to find themselves in some difficult  situations that  we have to pluck up the courage  (in order) to deal with them.

I am not different of  from the rest of the people. Of all the situations that /with which / I had dealt with, I can remember one (of them ) that was especially cruel and painful to me.

Many years ago, till the time of my 50th birthday, I was having a magnificent life. I have three children and a wife who loves me, and a good job with a nice wage. I was really enjoying a wonderful/ great/ moment in my life. However , things changed after that day , for that day was also the day  the chosen for my boss chose to  for sacked me.

I remember that back then, at the beginning, I was living  as in a nightmare. When the time passed At that time, and it was impossible for me to find a new job.  I fell into suffered from a strong depression. / I was extremely depressed then.  

Although, However, behind after of several months visiting a psychologist for several months, I realized that I have to /needed to/ pluck up the courage to deal with this terrible problem. My wife, my children and my whole family supported me, and at last I found could find a new job at last. It was the worst moment in my life, but fortunately, it ended /finished with a happy ending.

Thank you in advance for your review.
I will be very useful for me.