What I want for my future!!!
I am taking an english course because I really like english,I think it is exciting to learn a foreing language.
But in the future I would like to study a related carrer, I would like to be a teacher, I love kids and I enjoy teaching. That is why I am thinking in work a part time in a call center, I heard that in call centers people can work part time. So I will try...those are my plans for the future.
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What I want for my future!!!
I am taking an English course because I really like English. I think it is exciting to learn a foreign language.But in the future, I would like to study a related career related to my interests. I would like to be a teacher; I love kids and I enjoy teaching. (This sentence is good. However, it sounds choppy. When you have sentences with similar beginnings ex: "I would like to study... I would like to be....", then it doesn't flow well overall in a paragraph. I would suggest saying: "Since I love kids and enjoy teaching, I would like to be a teacher."It's not at the beginning, so it doesn't sound so repetitious. Hope this helps!) That is why I am thinking in to work a part time in a call center, I heard that in call centers people can work part time. So I will try! Those are my plans for the future.
Great work! You write well.
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What I want for my future!!!
I am taking an English course because I really like English,I think it is exciting to learn a foreing language.But in the future I would like to study a related department , I would like to be a teacher, I love kids and I enjoy teaching them. That is why I am thinking to work a part time in a call center, I heard that in call centers people can work part time. So I will try...those are my plans for the future.
I didn't understand what you mean with "call center"
Good luck
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What I want for my future!!!
I am taking an English course because I really like English. I think it is exciting to learn a foreign language.In the future, I would like to study a related career. I would like to be a teacher, because I love kids and I enjoy teaching. That is why I am thinking of working part time in a call center. I heard that in call centers people can work part time. So I will try...those are my plans for the future.
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