Sayaka's three positive things 20161128
Good morning, everyone!
My three positive things are :
1) I was lack of sleep but I waked up early and went to company.
I focused my works (仕事) because I had holiday last Friday, so I had some tasks.
I enjoyed working very much.
2) I had lunch with colleague of mine. We went to a hotel lounge where is my favorite place.
She also participated in wedding party and second party yesterday. She was very tired and said she didn't work in midmorning lol. We enjoyed the lunch time very much.
3) I had a flex time at three o'clock and went to bodywork (整体).
I was painful left back and left west (左の背中と左の腰). A doctor said, a back of the heart is autonomic nerves (自律神経). I had known the reason was a past bad stress of workplace. I said goodbye!
After bodywork, my body and feeling became very good.
Photo is lunch.
I also enjoyed cooking and eating a dinner!
Have a good day!
Sayaka
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Sayaka's three positive things 20161128
Good morning, everyone!My three positive things are :
1) I lacked sleep but I woke up early and went to work(people don't use company, they just say work).
I focused on my works (仕事) because I had holiday last Friday, so I had some tasks.
I enjoyed working very much.
2) I had lunch with a colleague of mine. We went to a hotel lounge, which is my favorite place.
She also participated in wedding party and a second party yesterday. She was very tired and said she didn't work at mid-morning lol. We enjoyed the lunch time very much.
3) I had a flex time at three o'clock and went to bodywork (整体).
I had painful left back and left waist (左の背中と左の腰). A doctor said, a back of the heart is autonomic nerves(not sure about what you mean here) (自律神経). I had known the reason was a past bad stress at workplace. I said goodbye!
After bodywork, my body felt very good.
Photo is of my lunch.
I also enjoyed cooking and eating a dinner!
Have a good day!
Sayaka
Work on proper use of the tenses and correct verbs. For example "waked up" is "woke up." Also, try to get the spellings right. Stop frequently using is/was and -ing forms and try to use verb 2. For example try to use "felt" in stead of "feeling" when talking about a completed action in the past. Maybe you would like to brush up on your simple past tense. Over all, nicely written.
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Sayaka's three positive things 20161128
Good morning, everyone!My three positive things are :
1) I was lacking sleep but I waked up early and went to work.
I focused on my work (仕事) because I had a holiday last Friday, so I had some tasks to do.
I enjoyed working very much.
2) I had lunch with colleagues of mine. We went to a hotel lounge that is my favorite place.
She also participated in the first and second wedding party yesterday. She was very tired and said she didn't work in the first part of the morning. We enjoyed lunch time very much.
3) I had a flex time at three o'clock and went to bodywork (整体).
I felt pain in the left side of my back and waist.(左の背中と左の腰). A doctor said, a back of the heart is autonomic nerves (自律神経)not sure what you mean here. I knew the reason was bad stress at the workplace. I said goodbye!
After bodywork, my body and feeling became very good.
Photo is lunch.
I also enjoyed cooking and eating dinner!
Have a good day!
Sayaka
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