Internet and life
Nowdays internet is more and more popular in our life.
Internet is very convenient to do something that we want to do, such as keeping in touch with our old friends and getting new friends whatever are they in, shopping , payying the telephone bill at home and so on.but there are something is not true on the internet. When we are chatting with a stranger,maybe his information is not true,so do not accept stranger's invitation.
Do not send your information on line,do not think anything is true on the internet.
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Internet and life
Nowadays the internet is more and more popular (maybe: important) in our lives.The Internet makes things we want to do very convenient/easy, such as keeping in touch with our old friends and making new friends wherever they are, shopping , paying the telephone bill at home and so on. However, some things on the internet are not true. When we are chatting with a stranger, maybe his details are not true (better: he might not be telling the truth about who he is), so don't accept invitations from strangers. Don't send people your personal information online. Don't think everything on the internet* is true.
(*I've changed the word order.)
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Internet and life
Nowdays internet is more and more popular in our life.Internet is very convenient to do something that we want to do, such as keeping in touch with our old friends, getting new ones whatever are they in, shopping , paying the telephone bills at home and so on. But there is a thing that is not true about the internet. When we are chatting with a stranger, maybe his information is not true, so do not accept stranger's invitation ( it depends Cheryl)
Do not send your information online and do not think that everything is true on the internet.
p/s: you have some mistakes between : anything and everything, something, some things and thing.
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