Practicing my english!!
Today I will take about something that I love in my live, The Theater.
"¿Why I like the theater? Because I love live the life where happens, without virtualities, without dispositives, without postponements, without excuses. To find to friend, see unknown, to feel the voice of the people, see them facing.
Never it could be narrated the sensation of faltering on tightrope, no record a video of the respiration of the actor two meters of distance, no to feel through of nothing chat the confrontation of your eyes."
I appreciate your corrections. Regards! ;)
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Practicing my English!!
Today I will talk about something that I truly love in my live, the theater.Why do I like the theater so much? Because I love the atmosphere of it all - without ?virtualities, without devices, without delays, without excuses. To find to friend, to see the unknown, to feel the voice of the people, to see them ??facing.
The sensation of walking the tightrope, without ?record of the respirations of the actors two meters apart, to not feel ???through of nothing chat the confrontation of your eyes."
I appreciate your corrections. Regards! ;)
It sounds a little bit odd at some points, but I tried to make it sound as natural as possible. Hopefully you get something out of it!
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Practicing my english!!
Today I will talk about something that I love in my life, The Theater."Why do I like the theater? Because I love to live the life where happens, without virtualities, negatives , without postponements and excuses. To find friends, to see unknown people, to feel the voice of the people, and to see them facing.
Never it could be narrated the sensation of faltering on tightrope, no record a video of the respiration of the actor two meters of distance, no to feel through of nothing chat the confrontation of your eyes."
I appreciate your corrections. Regards! ;)
P/s: I think there are a lot of mistakes in your writing. I tried to correct them but you know, I really didn't know what you meant here.
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Practicing my English!!
Today I will talk about something that I love in my life: the theater.Why do I like the theater? Because I love to live a full life, without virtualities, without dispositives, without quiescence, without excuses. To find a friend, experience the unknown, to feel the enthusiasm of the people, see their beaming faces.
Never could the sensation of faltering on a tightrope be conveyed, nor the breathe of the actor two meters away be recorded, nor the feeling of your eye's gaze in the absence of conversation be expressed.
I appreciate your corrections. Regards! ;)
I think I got the gist of what you were trying to say....I'm not exactly sure what you meant by virtualities and dispositives.
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