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Now，look at this statue，it is 28 meters high, 100 meters wide. She is the Guardian angel of sanya, and she is also the embodiment of the great woman，There is 4 elephants on each side of the goddess that means a great powerful and all the things will grow smoothly.
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There is 4 elephants on each side of the goddess that means a great powerful and all the things will grow smoothly.
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There is 4 elephants on each side of the goddess (whose meaning depicts) a great powerful (what? deity??? ) which/who ensures all things will grow smoothly.
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