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My name is Anita. I'm 23 years old .My hometown is in Inner Mongolia, but now I 'm living in Sanya. Sanya is the southern most seaside city in China.It's a beautiful city.
It has been one and half a years since I have graduated from college.I have been working for one year,now I am a wedding planner. It 's a happy job. My job needs me to draw and use to Photoshop . but I cannot do either,so designing a wedding is difficult for me .I want to became a real wedding designer,so now I need to work harder ,but I don't know how can I do it .I'm so sad
However,I also have a happy thing,I have a boyfriend ,we love each other so much. Maybe next year we will get married. Well, now I'm waitting for him to propose to me. I hope he does it soon .
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Introduce Myself
My name is Anita. I'm 23 years old .My hometown is in Inner Mongolia, but now I live in Sanya. Sanya is the southern most seaside city in China. It's a beautiful city.It has been one and half a years since I graduated from college. I have been working for one year now as a wedding planner. It's a happy job. My job needs me to be able to draw and use photoshop, but I can't draw. Also, I can't use photoshop, so designing a wedding is difficult for me. I want to became a real wedding designer, so now I need to work harder. I don't know how can i do it. I'm so sad.
However, I also have a happy thing, I have a boyfriend, and we love each other so much. Maybe next year we will get married. Well, now i'm waiting for him to propose to me. I hope he does it soon.
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Introduce Myself
My name is Anita. I'm 23 years old .My hometown in Inner Mongolia. but now, I 'm live in Sanya. Sanya ,the southern most seaside city in china.it's a beautiful city.e I graduated from college one &halfyear ago.I have been work for one yuar.now I am a wedding panner. That 's a happy job. My job need I can drawing or photoshop . but i cannt drawing, i also can't use photoshop,so design a wedding is difficult to me .I want to became a really wedding designer. so now i need work hard more .but i dont kowm how can i do .i 'm so sad
However,i also have happy thing,i have a boy friend ,we love each other so much. Maybe next year we will get marry. well, now i'm waitting he propose marriage to me. I hope he can hurry up
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Introducing Myself
My name is Anita. I'm 23 years old. My hometown is in Inner Mongolia, but now I'm living in Sanya. Sanya is the southern most seaside city in China. It's a beautiful city.It is has been one and half a years since I have graduated from college. I have been working for one year now. I am a wedding planner. That's a happy job. I'm happy about my job. My job needs me to can drawing or and use Photoshop, but i cannt drawing, i also can't use photoshop I cannot do either, so designing a wedding is difficult to for me .I want to become a really good wedding designer, so now I need work harder more, but I don't know how I can do it. I'm so sad.
However, I am also have very happy thing, because I have a boyfriend. We love each other so much. Maybe tomorrow next year we will get married. Well, now I'm waiting he for him to propose marriage to me. I hope he can fast will soon.
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谢谢ZhangtheGreat。你的中文也很好哦，谢谢你很细心的帮我改小作文，我会记住我的错误的。
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Thank you very much.Naela
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