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*Reedited. I would write it like this:
Yesterday was a really nice day. (We wouldn't necessarily use "such" unless it's in an informal context like an email or in speech. Though using "such" isn't incorrect.)
My boyfriend and I studied English at a cafe. (No accent in English, but in French, yes.)
Although I've mostly been the one committed to learning the language in our relationship, he's now applying himself more in English. (Using "English" twice in a sentence is a bit redundant. Choose a different word.)
It's a good relationship. We influence each other.
For instance, we can encourage and refocus one another when we lose motivation. (OR you could substitute "motivation" with "momentum.")
Our goal is communicating in English all of the time. (OR you could use ". . . communicating in English as much as possible" OR ". . . communicating in English as often as we can" OR "Our goal is to constantly communicate in English.")
Though we're unable to study like this at the moment, I believe we can do it in the near future.
Such a nice day.
It was such a nice day.I spent a day with my boyfriend yesterday.
One of the things we did is studying English at a café.
Although I’m committed to learning English, he is also applying himself to the study English.
Our relationship is good because we can have a good influence.
For instance, when we lost a motivation about learning English, we can encourage and motivate each other.
Our goal is speaking English all the time when we communicate.
We can’t do it anytime soon but I’m sure we can in the near future.
Such a nice day.
It was such a nice day.I spent a day with my boyfriend yesterday.
One of the things we did was studying English at a café.
Although I’m committed to learning English, he is also applying himself to the study studying English.
Our relationship is good because we can have a good influence each other well.
For instance, when we lost a the motivation about to learning English, we can encouraged and get motivated each other.
Our goal is to speaking English all the time when we communicate.
We can’t do it anytime soon, but I’m sure we can in the near future.
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