Thelma & Louise (a taks to practice past tense)
This is a task to practice my writing in the past tense.
The last weekend I saw the movie Thelma & Louise. I hadn't have the pleasure to watch it,and it turned out to be great to me. It was a very good story and made me laugh too. I liked all the adventures these two women had and most of them unintentionally.
I hadn't a clue about what this movie treated, and I had not idea that they was going to kill someone,and all the facts that happened after that. It was like if they were discovered other women inside them. Like they could get out all their strength and courage they had within.
I liked the end too, at least they had a wonderful time before to die, and died with bravery and love. :)
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Thelma & Louise (a taks to practice past tense)
This is a task to practice my writing in the past tense.The last weekend I saw the movie Thelma & Louise. I hadn't HAD the pleasure to watch it, and it turned out to be great (no need to write to me). It was a very good story and made me laugh too. I liked all the adventures these two women had and most of them unintentionally. (Not sure what you mean by this, maybe you're looking for a different word).
I hadn't a clue about what this movie treated, and I had no idea that they were going to kill someone, and all the events/things that happened after that. It was like if they had discovered other women inside them, like they could unleash/release all their strength and courage they had within.
I liked the end too, at least they had a wonderful time before their deaths, and they died with bravery and love. :)
WELL DONE!! Just a few errors, mostly related to vocabulary or word choice.
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Thelma & Louise (a taks to practice past tense)
This is a task to practice my writing in the past tense.The Last weekend, I saw the movie Thelma & Louise. I hadn't have had the pleasure to of watching it,and it turned out to be great to me. It was a very good story and it made me laugh, too. I liked all the adventures these two women had. and Most of them were unintentionally.
I hadn't a clue about what this movie was about treated, . And I had not idea that they was were going to kill someone,and all or any of the facts that happened after that. It was like as if they were had discovered other women inside them. Like they could get out all their strength and courage they had within.
I liked the end, too., At least they had a wonderful time before to die they died, and died with bravery and love. :)
Nice work! I understood everything. I've suggested changes I hope will be helpful. Good luck with your English!
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Good attempt - just a few changes but what you wrote was easy to understand
Thelma & Louise (a taks to practice past tense)
This is a task to practice my writing in the past tense.The Last weekend I saw the movie Thelma & Louise. I hadn't have had the pleasure to watch of seeing it,and but it turned out to be great to me watch. It was a very good story and made me laugh too. I liked all the adventures these two women had and most of them were unintentional
I hadn't a clue about what this movie was about treated, and I had not no idea that they was going to kill someone,and all the facts events that happened afterwards that. It was like as if they were discovered other women inside them. Like they could get out access all of their strength and courage they had within.
I liked the end too, at least they had a wonderful time before to die, dying and died with bravery and love. :)
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