Weather in my town
Good afternoon,
today there is a very bad weather in my town, it's cloudy, windy and rainy and this morning I had some difficult with my daily walk with the dog. Moreover I went at work by car ( usually I go by moto or bicycle ). Unfortunately seem that there'll be rain all the week, so, maybe, I could' not to do jogging within the week.
Cheers :)
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Weather in my town
Good afternoon,Today there is very bad weather in my town. It's cloudy, windy and rainy, and this morning I had a difficult time with my daily walk with the dog. Moreover, I went to work by car (usually I go by moto or bicycle). Unfortunately, it seems that there'll be rain all week, so maybe I will not be able to go jogging this week.
Cheers :)
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Weather In My Town
Today, there is very bad weather (or a bad weather system) in my town, it's cloudy, windy, and rainy, and this morning, I had some difficulties with my daily walk with the dog. Moreover, I went to work by car (usually I go by motorcycle ? or bicycle). Unfortunately, it seems that there'll be rain all week, so, I will likely not go jogging this week.
Cheers :)
Overall Emiliano, I think you did well in writing this, I just made a few corrections to comma usage, and reworded one of your sentences to make the flow sound better, but I think you did a good job overall! If you have any questions, please let me know! If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!
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