Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. Do you agree?
I partially disagree with idea that life is better today than it was 100 years ago.
First, I think that nowadays we have a lot of tool to improve our lives, for example, smartphones, washing machine and more electronic devices that they make our lives more easy and our grandparents hadn`t it. Now is too easy send a mail, with your smartphone you can apply for a job for example, you can see your bank`s accounts a lot of things that our grandparents couldn´t it.
Secondly, it is clear that the subject of the entertainment we are worse than 100 years ago because we are less sociable today than 100 years ago because our grandparents when they were children they played in the street with other kids all day, now the children usually play alone in their houses watching television all day, or playing videogames.
Finally, in my point of view the life is better today than it was 100 years ago because we have more facilities, for example, we have better medicines than 100 years ago but today we don’t take care correctly our environment.
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Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. Do you agree?
I partially disagree with idea that life is better today than it was 100 years ago.First, I think that nowadays we have a lot of tools to that improve our lives, for example, smartphones, washing machines and more other electronic devices that they make our lives more easier and that our grandparents hadn`t it didn't have. Nowadays it's too very easy to send a mail, with your smartphone you can apply for a job for example (or) apply for a job with your smartphone, or you can see your bank`s accounts -- a lot of things that our grandparents couldn't it do.
Secondly, it is clear that, the subject of the with regard to entertainment, we are worse than 100 years ago because we are less sociable today than 100 years ago. because When our grandparents when they were children they played in the street with other kids all day, nowadays the children usually play alone in their houses watching television all day, or playing video games.
Finally, in from my point of view (or: in my opinion) the life is better today than it was 100 years ago because we have more facilities, for example, we have better medicines than 100 years ago, but today we don’t take care correctly of our environment correctly (better: very well).
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Totally agree with your points of view
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Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. Do you agree?
I partly disagree that life is better today than it was 100 years ago.First, I think that nowadays we have a lot of tools to improve our lives, eg., smartphones, washing machines and many electronic devices. Our grandparents had none of these and now it is too easy send a mail. And with your smartphone you can apply for a job, you can see your bank account and do lots of things that our grandparents could not.
Second, it is clear that in the subject of entertainment we are worse than 100 years ago because we are less sociable today than those days when our grandparents were children and played in the street with other kids all day long. Now children usually play alone in their houses watching television all day, or playing video games.
Finally, from my point of view, life is better today than it was 100 years ago because we have more facilities, for example, we have better medicines than 100 years ago but today we don’t take good care of our environment.
Very well written!
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Thank you, It is a exercise for my academy.
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I enjoyed reading your entry JuanFran.
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