Letter to Bill

Dear Bill,

I’m glad for you letter. My computer is just 2 years old(en ingles edad es "es 2 años veijo" en lugar de "tiene 2 años") so it’s practically new. I use my computer for playing computer games, watching videos on youtube("watch" es para videos, televisión, y peliculas. pero se puede usar "see" para peliculas tambien) and doing homeworks("homework" nunca está plural). Currently I have several videos about cycling for uploading to youtube(el accion está ocurriendo ahora, así usarías el presente progresivo). I love playing computer games; I have been playing since I was a child. I prefer playing games about races and football however I don’t like playing computer games about fighting("fight" es una pelea specifica, "fights" es peleas en general, y "fighting" es el acción de pelear).
The last week I bought a mobile phone; it’s very big and I can connect with my car to listen to music(si dices "para hacer algo" y "para" significa "lograr", dirías "to do something") while I am driving.

Hugs (En inglés, no es común decir "hugs", pero puedes decirlo si estás escribiendo a alguien en su familia)

Alberto

(si tienes más preguntas, puede enviarme un mensaje. lo siento por mi español)

A Letter to Bill

Dear Bill,

I’m glad for you letter. (Thanks for writing.) My computer has  is just 2 years so it’s practically new. I use my computer for playing computer games, seeing videos (watching videos) on youtube and doing homeworks homework. Currently I am doing several videos about cycling for uploading (to upload) it on youtube. I love playing computer games. I have been playing them since I was a child. I prefer playing computer about races and football. (race and football games) However, I don’t like playing computer games about fight (fighting games). 
The last week I bought a mobile phone. It’s very big and I can connect with it in my car  to listen to music while I am driving.

Hugs (In this context, possibly better to use: Best wishes)

Alberto