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where do you prefer to spend your free time ? indoors or outdoors ? Since daily activities takes the longest part of our time , free time becomes precious. Most people think deeply how to exploit it well. Although, spending free time outdoors can be an amusing idea , i would like to stay indoors due to moral and physical reasons. From my perspective, people spend most of their time exterior in order to work or study, as a result they feel nervous and exhausted all the working days. By the weekend, they need to get relaxed in a comfortable place, far away of transport noise and work pressure. and if you ask me , home is the best worm place to live the pleasure of relaxing. To illustrate, when i was working for a full time job, i was leaving my house at 7 at morning and returned at 8 by night. I spent all day out so i was obliged to eat out and even sleep at the work some time when i have a lot of tasks. So, on the weekend, as it is my free time , i stay at my worm home. Enjoying housework gardening and even cooking. On Monday, i feel that i recovered and i turned my energy on. As all the family member can't spend time together in their busy time, free time is a great opportunity to be together. While studying or working, we meet our friends and our colleagues but we don't have enough time for our family. As a consequence, parents miss their children and vis versa. So to spend the free time inside our beautiful home will be an interesting solution to save our family coherence.the family members can get more time to eat, talk and play together. To summarize, spending our free time inside may help us to relax and have great time with our family but this doesn't mean that we shouldn't travel and get amusing moment outdoors.

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Where do you prefer to spend your free time ? indoors or outdoors ?

Since daily activities take the longest part of our time, free time becomes precious. Most people think deeply how to exploit it well. Although, spending free time outdoors can be an amusing idea , i would like to stay indoors due to moral and physical reasons.
From my perspective, people spend most of their time exterior in order to work or study, as a result they feel nervous and exhausted during their work days (the way your wrote it was understandable of course, but we don't usually say it like that). By the weekend, they need to get relax in a comfortable place, far away from transportation noise and work pressures, and if you ask me, home is the best warm place to live/experience the pleasure of relaxing. To illustrate, when I was working for a full time job, I was leaving my house at 7 in the morning and returning at 8 at night. I spent all day out so I was obliged to eat out and even sleep at the work sometimes when I had a lot of tasks. So, on the weekend, as it is my free time, I stay at my warm home, enjoying housework, gardening and even cooking. On Monday, i feel that I recovered and I turned my energy on.
As all the family member can't spend time together in their busy time, free time is a great opportunity to be together. While studying or working, we meet our friends and our colleagues but we don't have enough time for our family. As a consequence, parents miss their children and vis versa. So to spend the free time inside our beautiful home would be an interesting solution to save our family coherence. The family members can get more time to eat, talk and play together.

To summarize, spending our free time inside may help us to relax and have a great time with our family but this doesn't mean that we shouldn't travel and have/experience amusing moments outdoors.

Nice writing Mouna, you use English quite well. If you have any questions regarding my corrections, please let me know. - Jason

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