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My indecisive daughter This history is about my eldest daughter. It happened two years ago aproximately, when she preparated her exam for acces at University. He was seventeen because he was born in October and began his career at this age and before she turns eighteen Her hair is dark brown almost black, but her face is very white. She is thin and tall. On day of the exam, his face was still whiter and looked thinner because he stayed home for many days studying and she losed weight She was and she is a very good student but she did not know what degree universitary do. She was indecisive. Only the law to the seemed an option and still she was not convinced. During two years of high school every day she asked me about my opinion. "What I must do mum"? And I answered every day the same "you must decided". One day she said law, an other day economist, third day of double-degree laws and economist. And so every day for two years !! When the day of the exam came, she still thought

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My indecisive daughter.

This story is about my eldest daughter. It happened approximately two years ago , when she was preparing for her entrance exam for access at University. She was seventeen because she was born in October and wanted to begin her career at this age and before she turned eighteen.

Her hair is dark brown almost black, but her face is very white (pale). She is thin and tall. On day of the exam her face was still pale and looked thinner because she stayed at home for many days studying and she lost weight
She was and she is a very good student but she did not know which degree to do at university. She was indecisive.  A law degree   seemed to be her main/first option but still she was not convinced.
During her two years of high school, every day she asked me about my opinion. "What should I must do mum?"  And I answered her every day the same, "you must decide".
One day she said law,  another day an economist. She even considered  doing a double degree  in law and economics. This continued every day for two years !!
When the day of the exam came, she still had not decided.

A very good story. There are  two things to consider: 1. spelling errors. 2. Gender - He / She / Him / Her.

Your sentence structure will improve with practice. Well done!


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