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First part of Summry of Kimi No Na Wa The story is set in Japan. The comet will come around the Earth in one month , and the comet appears for the first time in 1000 years. It's a love story and focuses on two teenagers. Mysterious, spiritual and heartwarming film. The main character’s names are Mitsuha and Taki. Mitsuha is a girl and a high school student who lives in the countryside, and she is a shrine maiden consecrated to a God. And Taki is a boy who lives in Tokyo and he is also a high school student. One day, they switched bodies while they were sleeping. But they thought it was just a dream, at first. Day after day, they realized that it was real. Because their friends were telling them strange stories about them that they didn't know. They got in touch with each other to write their names and questions on their diaries. And they have decided about the rule, which is to keep memos of their lives while they were switching bodies. As they spent time together, an attraction develops between the two. They wanted to meet each other. But they could never swich their bodies since that day the comet came. So he was going to meet her rely just on his memory of when he was switching bodies. And he found her town with great difficulty but it had disappeared because of the collision of the comet. In fact, the comet had come to the Earth three years ago on his timeline. He checked many old articles about the comet impact, and he found her name on the death roll of the comet impact. So he realized that they had been traveled beyond time and space when they were switching bodies.

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First part of Summary of Kimi No Na Wa

The story is set in Japan. The A comet will come around the Earth in one month, and the comet will appears for the first time in 1000 years.

It's a love story and which focuses on two teenagers.
It is a mysterious, spiritual and heartwarming film.

The main character’s names are Mitsuha and Taki.

Mitsuha is a girl and a high school student who lives in the countryside, and she is a shrine maiden consecrated to a God.
And Taki is a boy who lives in Tokyo and he is also a high school student.

One day, they switched bodies while they were sleeping, but they thought it was just a dream, at first.

Day after day, they started to realized that it was real, because their friends were telling them strange stories about them that they didn't know.

They got in touch with each other to write their names and questions on in their diaries.

And They have decided about the on a rule, which is was to keep memos of their lives while they were switching bodies.

As they spent time together, an attraction developed between the two.

They wanted to meet each other, but they could never switch their bodies since that day the comet came.

So Therefore, he was going to meet her by relying just on his memory of when he was switching bodies.

And He found her town with great difficulty but it had disappeared because of the collision of the comet.

In fact, the comet had come to the Earth three years ago on in his timeline.
He checked many old articles about the comet impact, and he found her name on its the death roll of the comet impact.

So He then realized that they had been traveled beyond time and space when they were switching bodies.

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This is very well written, Mark! Your English is really good. 良かったね!

A few tips: don't be afraid to conjoin sentences if they are quite short, because the text will flow better. For example, if the second sentence starts with "but"(try not to start sentences with "so", "and" or "but").

Also, if you start a sentence in past tense, the rest of it should also stay in past tense (do not change tense during sentences).

Last of all my small advice on style is to avoid repeated phrases in the same sentence, if you can avoid it, such as "the comet impact". You can simply use "it" the second time you mention it.

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