Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好 Monique,
你好吗？我希望你很好。我听到在 Netherlands 天气很冷。这里天气很好。天气很热。
没天太阳照耀。我们需要雨。昨天 ３０分钟我去了跑步。开始雨了， 我回家了。什么时候雨，
我不喜欢出门。我找心公寓。我的公寓很小。我要公寓有大的厨房，有卧式，有书见，还有厕所。
房租应该不太贵。我跟我的朋友一起看公寓。
今天晚上我跟我的朋友Lilly看电影。他喜欢中国电影。我想你很多。问你好妈妈。
我写别的信函狠快。
Hello Monique.
How are you? I hope you are alright.
I heard the weather in the Netherlands is very cold. Here on the Island the weather is very good. The sun is shining everyday. We do need some rain to fall.
Yesterday I went running for 30 minutes. It started raining, so I returned home. When it's raining I don't like to leave the house.
I'm looking for a new appartment. My appartment is too small. I want a appartment with a big kitchen, a bedroom, a studyroom and a bathroom. The rent should be not too expensive. My friend Lilly is going with me to look at appartments.
Tonight I'm going to watch a movie with my friend Lily. She likes to watch Chinese movies.
I miss you very much. Say hello to mother.
I'll write you another letter very soon.
Xiexie! Thank you for your help.
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你好 Monique,
你好吗？我希望你很好。我听说在 Netherlands 天气很冷。这里天气很好。天气很热。
每天都是晴天。我们需要一些雨水。昨天我去跑步了，跑了30分钟。开始下雨的时候我就回家了。下雨的时候，我不喜欢出门。
我正在找新的公寓。我现在的公寓太小。我想要一个公寓有大的厨房，有卧室，有书房，还有卫生间。
房租应该不太贵。我跟我的朋友一起看公寓。
今天晚上我跟我的朋友Lilly看电影。她喜欢中国电影。我很想你。向妈妈问好。
很快我会给你写下一封信。
PS ： 我很喜欢你的这封信，很可爱。
我们不说“我想你很多”，我们说“我很想你”。 但是呢，我想你很多，我觉得这句话也非常可爱。
Hello Monique.
How are you? I hope you are alright.
I heard the weather in the Netherlands is very cold. Here on the Island the weather is very good. The sun is shining everyday. We do need some rain to fall.
Yesterday I went running for 30 minutes. It started raining, so I returned home. When it's raining I don't like to leave the house.
I'm looking for a new appartment. My appartment is too small. I want a appartment with a big kitchen, a bedroom, a studyroom and a bathroom. The rent should be not too expensive. My friend Lilly is going with me to look at appartments.
Tonight I'm going to watch a movie with my friend Lily. She likes to watch Chinese movies.
I miss you very much. Say hello to mother.
I'll write you another letter very soon.
Xiexie! Thank you for your help.
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Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
Monique：
你好！
我希望你很好。我听说 Netherlands 很冷。我这里天气很好，很热，每天都出太阳，我们需要雨。 昨天 我花了３０分钟去跑步。开始下雨了， 我回家了。下雨的时候，我不喜欢出门。我要找新公寓。我的公寓很小，我要的公寓有大的厨房，有卧室，有书房，还有厕所。
房租应该不太贵。我跟我的朋友一起去看公寓。
今天晚上我跟我的朋友Lilly看电影，他喜欢中国电影。我很想你，代我向你妈妈问好。
我写别的信函很快。
Hello Monique.
How are you? I hope you are alright.
I heard the weather in the Netherlands is very cold. Here on the Island the weather is very good. The sun is shining everyday. We do need some rain to fall.
Yesterday I went running for 30 minutes. It started raining, so I returned home. When it's raining I don't like to leave the house.
I'm looking for a new appartment. My appartment is too small. I want a appartment with a big kitchen, a bedroom, a studyroom and a bathroom. The rent should be not too expensive. My friend Lilly is going with me to look at appartments.
Tonight I'm going to watch a movie with my friend Lily. She likes to watch Chinese movies.
I miss you very much. Say hello to mother.
I'll write you another letter very soon.
Xiexie! Thank you for your help.
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Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好 Monique,你好吗？我希望你很好。我听到了在 Netherlands的天气很冷，但是这里的天气却很热,，截然不同的。
没每天都是太阳照耀阳关灿烂。我们需要现在严重缺雨。昨天 ３０分钟我去了跑步跑了三十分钟。开始下雨了以后， 我就回家了。下雨时什么时候雨，
我不喜欢出门。我会找心新的公寓。因为我的公寓我这儿很小。我可能就不想要贵的房子，就j却要一套有更大的厨房，卧室，书房，以及浴室的公寓有大的厨房，有卧式，有书见，还有厕所。
房租应该不太贵。我跟我的朋友一起看会找一间公寓。
然后，今天晚上我跟我的朋友Lilly会看中国的电影。她喜欢中国电影。我很想你很多。问你好妈妈请向你母亲问好。
我写别的信函狠快。我不久将给你再写信。
Hello Monique.
How are you? I hope you are alright.
I heard the weather in the Netherlands is very cold. Here on the Island the weather is very good. The sun is shining everyday. We do need some rain to fall.
Yesterday I went running for 30 minutes. It started raining, so I returned home. When it's raining I don't like to leave the house.
I'm looking for a new apartment. My apartment is too small. I want a apartment with a big kitchen, a bedroom, a study room and a bathroom. The rent should be not too expensive. My friend Lilly is going with me to look at apartments.
Tonight I'm going to watch a movie with my friend Lily. She likes to watch Chinese movies.
I miss you very much. Say hello to mother.
I'll write you another letter very soon.
Xiexie! Thank you for your help.
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Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好 Monique,你好吗？我希望你很好。我听到說在 Netherlands 天气很冷。这里天气很好。天气很热(You don't mention this.)。没每天太阳照耀。我们(I may add "反而= instead" here.)需要雨。
昨天我去了跑步，跑了３０分钟。因為开始下雨了， 我便回家了。什么时候雨，我不喜欢在下雨的時候出门。
我正在(indicate the Present Continuous Tense you use.)找心新公寓。我的公寓很太小了。我想要公寓有大的厨房，有卧式，有书房见，还有厕所。
房租应该不會太贵。我跟我的朋友一起(I may add 去 here.)看公寓。
今天晚上我跟我的朋友Lilly看电影。他喜欢中国电影。我非常想你很多。請替我向你的妈妈问好。
我很快會再写别的信函給你狠快。
It's really a sweet letter. I don't adjust it too much because I think it's great to keep your tone and voice.
Hello Monique.
How are you? I hope you are alright.
I heard the weather in the Netherlands is very cold. Here on the Island the weather is very good. The sun is shining everyday. We do need some rain to fall.
Yesterday I went running for 30 minutes. It started raining, so I returned home. When it's raining I don't like to leave the house.
I'm looking for a new appartment. My appartment is too small. I want a appartment with a big kitchen, a bedroom, a studyroom and a bathroom. The rent should be not too expensive. My friend Lilly is going with me to look at appartments.
Tonight I'm going to watch a movie with my friend Lily. She likes to watch Chinese movies.
I miss you very much. Say hello to mother.
I'll write you another letter very soon.
Xiexie! Thank you for your help.
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Are these sentences correct? (A letter)
你好 Monique,你好吗？我希望你很好最近过得不错。我听到在 Netherlands 天气很冷。这里天气很好。天气很热。
没天白天太阳照耀。我们需要雨。昨天 ３０分钟我去了跑步跑步了。天开始下雨了， 于是我回家了。什么时候雨，
我不喜欢出门。我找心新公寓。我的公寓很小。我要公寓有大的厨房，有卧式卧室，有书见书房，还有厕所。
房租应该不太贵。我跟我的朋友一起看公寓。
今天晚上我跟我的朋友Lilly看电影。他喜欢中国电影。我想你很多我很想你。问你好妈妈向你妈妈问好。
我写别的信函狠快我很快会在给你写信的。
Hello Monique.
How are you? I hope you are alright.
I heard the weather in the Netherlands is very cold. Here on the Island the weather is very good. The sun is shining everyday. We do need some rain to fall.
Yesterday I went running for 30 minutes. It started raining, so I returned home. When it's raining I don't like to leave the house.
I'm looking for a new appartment. My appartment is too small. I want a appartment with a big kitchen, a bedroom, a studyroom and a bathroom. The rent should be not too expensive. My friend Lilly is going with me to look at appartments.
Tonight I'm going to watch a movie with my friend Lily. She likes to watch Chinese movies.
I miss you very much. Say hello to mother.
I'll write you another letter very soon.
Xiexie! Thank you for your help.
I can't understand the"什么时候雨，我不喜欢出门".I guess the mean is that you don't want to go out when the weather is rain.you can express "下雨的时候我就不想出门"
My English is poor but I do hope I can help you in Chinese.
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