A Great Day! Could someone correct it?
30 years ago I left school. Today we had a reunion (or meeting?) of former school's classmates, it was emotional to be all together again. During our lunch I was looking at around me, but my mind was lost somewhere; suddenly I felt all those years like it if were yesterday. We remembered our childhood, our little stories, our games (or play?) on the playground at playtime. We laughed a lot of ourselves. Nowadays, we are middle-age men, but today we came back to be like children.
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A Great Day! Could someone correct it?
30 years ago I left school. Today we had a reunion (or meeting?) of my former school's classmates. It was emotional to be all together again. During our lunch I was looking at around me, but my mind was lost somewhere; suddenly I felt all those years like it if (or as if it) were yesterday. We remembered our childhood, our little stories, our games (or play? either) on the playground at playtime. We laughed a lot of at ourselves. Nowadays, we are middle-age men, but today we came back to be like children.Enhorabuena! Muy bien escrito. Buenos imagenes. -Sven
Si quisiste decir que habias cumplido la escuelas, más correcto es ....I finished school.
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Hi Jane, you're right. Life runs fast. We should enjoy it and be happy.
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Time goes really fast. When we are a kid, we live with no purpose just for happiness. When we are teenager we live for future and dream about future. When we grow a little bit more older I think we live with memory. There's no way to stop the time, but we have a choice to enjoy every second.
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