What did I do today?
I woke up give or take 8 o' clock a.m 8:30 a.m. After this I brushed my teeth and I had a fun time with my dogs.
I work in a bank. My job starts 10 o' clock a.m. So I went to work 9:50 a.m. Before I come home I took some shirt that were with my seamstress. I came back home, and I had a good time talking with mom about situation happened today. I've spent a time watching videos on YouTube.com, I was watching some X factor's parts. Few time ago I was studied English Language, because I'll have a test tomorrow in my scholl. Right now is on my bedtime, then I'll go sleep soon.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 6
1
What did I do today?
I work at a bank. My job starts at 10 o' clock a.m. So I went to work at 9:50 a.m. Before I came home I picked up some shirts that were with my seamstress. I came back home and I had a good time talking with mom about stuff/things that happened today. I spent a time watching videos on YouTube.com, I was watching some X factor's clips/videos. I studied English Language (when did you study? A few hours/days/months ago? If so, you can say "Just a few hours ago I studied English because...), because I have a test tomorrow at my school. Right Now it's my bedtime. I'll go sleep soon.
Azul = as sugestões
Vermelho = os correções
Good job! Just a few things to correct! If you have any questions just let me know. Don't worry it's sounding good! But as always, I write a lot of suggestions. Good luck on tomorrow's exam!
1
What did I do today?
I woke up at give or take from 8 o' clock a.m to 8:30 a.m. After this I brushed my teeth and I had a fun time (good time is used more frequently) with my dogs.I work in at a bank. My job starts at 10 o' clock a.m. So I went to work at 9:50 a.m. Before I came home I took some shirts that were with my seamstress. I came back home, and I had a good time talking with mom about the situation that happened today. I've spent a some time watching videos on YouTube.com, I was watching some X factor's clips parts. Few Some time ago I was studied studying the English Language, because I'll have a test tomorrow in my school. Right now is on my bedtime, then so I'll go sleep soon.
good job!
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
