Hi,

It is the first time to hear you speak Vietnamese. That's good. I think you have a pretty good vocab and the structures. However, your pronunciation for some words are not really clear because of the accent. For example, người Việt, "Việt", go down your voice ( your voice sounds like Viết). You need to focus more on that. Also, I think it would be better if you change some mistakes of using the words. Here are some ones:

+ the pronoun : mình instead of tôi. Tôi is sort of used for formal speech like when you are in a meeting or in a press. Otherwise, it is considered as a "cold" pronoun.  When you talked to the others on Youtube like that, it is more casual, so it is more friendly to use "mình". 

+ tiếng mẹ đẻ, not tiếng mẹ

+ Thỉnh thoảng, người Việt không hiểu mình gì cả. 

+ câu chuyện này tên là ____

+ con của mình, not em bé. 

+ bây giờ chắc là mình phải dừng video ở đây, not muốn hết video

That's all. Oh, the word you said in the end (Baka, baka), does that mean goodbye in Russian?

It is a cool way to learn language by publish it on Youtube. I am learning French now and I will try this way when my French is better. :)

Ok. Look forward to your next video. 

Nga

Hello guys! I need your advice.

I can understand your story, but i have to pay attention highly, but i think your voice is beautiful with Vietnamese. The bottom line i want to share with you after watching video is you inspire me to learn more language.

Thanks and next time, i wanna see your little angel. wanna  say" hi "with her.