Luck Day
Today,I have a good news,The result of mathematical Modeing competition and I won the second place.So Thanks to my companys, let's me very greatly touched for their action.I hope we can take a frist on next competition.
Lucky Day
Today,I have good news,The results of mathematical Modeling competition were announced and I won the second place.So Thanks to my teammates, I'm really touched by their action.I hope we can get first prize on next time.
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Lucky Day
Today, I have good news (we don't use "a" with plural): the result of Mathematical Modeling Competition. I won the second place. So thanks to my companies (colleagues?), I'm really touched by their action. I hope we can get first prize on the next competition.1
My Lucky Day!
Today, I have good news. The results of the mathematical Modeling competition were announced / posted / given / listed and I won second place. So, I want to publicly thank those in my company who allowed me to participate/ compete since the opportunity was much appreciated. I hope we can take first place in the next competition!Congratulations! As to the English, pay attention to the spacing after the punctuation and your spelling. I hope this helps you. J.
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