A different week
This week was different in Ecuador, from wednesday to today it was holliday. 5 rest-days!
Many people traveled to the beach, this is the favourite place for people in vacations.
But people who have traveled in other holidays have always the same problem, when it's time to come back home, there are so many people traveling at the same time on the road, that causes too much traffic and the travel time is unsopportable.
Therefore I prefer to stay in my city and to rest.
On Friday I visited my family and we make a delicious breakfast, later we ate oranges just taken of the tree, it was a good day.
Tomorrow things will back to normal, if it can be called normal because the Christmas atmosphere is begins to notice.
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A Different Week
This week was different in Ecuador.From Wednesday to today it was holliday. - 5 rest-daysdays of rest! [nothing wrong here, but "rest days" isn't common in US English. We would probably say "five days off"]Many people traveled to the beach [break sentence here using period or semi-colon. If using a period, capitalize T on "this"], this is the favourite [US spelling is "favorite"] place for people in on vacations. "to be on vacation" (estar de vacaciones) or "to go on vacation" (ir de vacaciones) are common US English phrases I'm going on vacation next week. He was on vacation when had the accident. Let's go on vacation together. When people are on vacation, they don't worry about what's happening back home.
But people who have traveled in other holidays have always the same problem., When it's time to come back home, there are so many people traveling at the same time on the road, that it causes too much traffic, and the travel time is unsopportable intolerable [or any of John's alternative phrases].
Therefore I prefer to stay in my city and to rest.
On Friday I visited my family and we make made a delicious breakfast.,Later we ate oranges just taken of fresh from the tree.It was a good day.
Tomorrow things will back to normal, if it can be called normal, because the Christmas atmosphere is begins to notice season has begun [or has arrived] We often refer to "the Christmas spirit" when referring to the atmosphere that surrounds the whole holiday season. You might add a sentence to add just a few details about what the "Christmas atmosphere" is like in Ecuador.
"Run-on sentences" are only a grammatical error in written English. In speaking, you would naturally pause at the right places, so of course punctuation wouldn't matter. :-)
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A different week
This week was different in Ecuador, from Wednesday to until today it was a holiday. 5 rest-days!Many people travelled to the beach, this is the favourite place for people in on vacations.
But people who have travelled in during other holidays have always have the same problem, when it's time to come back home, there are so many people travelling at the same time on the roads, that causes too much traffic and the travel time is unsopportable (you can use a lot of different adjectives here, unsupportable doesn't sound that natural. You could say travel time was a nightmare / it took twice as long / traffic was bumper to bumper / the roads were really congested).
Therefore I prefer to stay in my city and to rest.
On Friday I visited my family and we made a delicious breakfast, later we ate oranges just taken of freshly picked from the tree, it was a good day.
Tomorrow things will back to normal, if it can be called normal because the Christmas atmosphere is begins to notice has begun.
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