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Yesterday I Bought a Bicycle. 4days ago I ordered Bicycle by internet. Yesterday I received it. It needs to assemble so I assembled it for 1 hour. At first I thought it is very easy to me, but i confused many things to put together. Anyway I finished assembling and hiked a riverside for a 3 hours. After the hiking my body told me that "Are you kidding? You didn't exercise yet. You needed warm-up and riding a bike little time. Wake up!" Now i feel pain all over my body.

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Yesterday I Bought a Bicycle.

Four days ago I ordered a bicycle off (on) the internet.
I got it yesterday. It needed to be assembled.  It took me 1 hour to assemble it. 
At first I thought it would be easy for me to do, but because there were so many parts, I quickly became confused.
Anyway, after I finished assembling it, I hiked alongside the a riverside for a 3 hours.
After the hike my body seemed to say to me, "Are you kidding? You didn't exercise enough yet. You needed to warm-up first, and then ride your bike. Wake up!"
Now I ache all over my body.
Now my body hurts all over.

그건대문자로써야주세요.   
단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             
이건더자연스러운이나더일반적인방법을표현합니다.   
맞은구두점과띄어쓰기을사용해주세요.   
제코멘트나 제안입니다.     
낸시4366으로색은열쇠가만들었입니다. 도움이됐으면좋겠습니다.  
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만약 대명사는 "i"가 혼자라면, 그러면 "i"는 항상 대문자가 입니다.

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