A Ray of Hope
On the verge of giving up,
I heard that healing voice,
telling me to pursue my dream
and never regretting my choice
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A Ray of Hope
On the verge of giving up,I heard that healing voice,
telling me to pursue my dream
and to never regret regretting my choice. [or "never to regret...".]
Nice!
Only suggestion is to use "parallel construction" by starting each of the two phrases with the same verb form ("to pursue" and "to...regret").
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That's a really little lovely poem!!!:) keep it up, Suade(Y)
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:)
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