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Things that children do!
In a small and barely inhabited town located near the Guadalquivir river, a naughty boy who was around seven years old, lived with his parents. He used to spend everyday playing pranks. One day, he had been collecting insects all morning and putting them into in different small cardboard boxes.Another day, he threw a dirty ball at a neighbors' car which had been cleaned only yesterday. The neighbor was very irritated and called the boys parents. Finally, this guy was punished by his parents and prevented from hanging out with his friends for a week.
To sum up, these histories are funny anecdotes which we will remember all our life. Those things that children do.
Things of children
In a small and scarce sparsely inhabited town located near the Guadalquivir river, a naughtly (Not how you use that word and I'm not sure what you were trying to say) guy boy who was around seven years old, lived with their his parents. hHe used to spend everyday doing pranks. One day, he had been pursuing insects all morning been pursuing insects and putting them into in diferent different cartons small box of carton.Another day, he threw a dirty ball for at the neighbour´s car which had been cleaned one day ago. The Nneighbor got very irritated and called the guy's boy's parents. Finally, this the guy boy was punished by his parents without by not being allowed to hanging out with his friends for a week.
In To sum up, those these histories memories are a funny anecdote which we will remember over for life.
Things of Children
Things of children [We might say "Childhood Things"]
In a small and scarce sparsely inhabited town located near the Guadalquivir River, a naughtly guy mischievous boy who was around seven years old, lived with their his parents. ,[You need to break this into 2 sentences so that it isn't a long, "run-on" sentence.] He used to spend every day doing playing pranks on people. One day, he chased insects all morning been pursuing insects and putting them into in different small boxes. of carton.Another day, he threw a dirty ball for at [or toward] a neighbour´s car which that had been cleaned one day ago the day before. The neighbour got very irritated and called guy´s the boy's parents. Finally, this guy the boy was punished by his parents without by hanging losing his right to hang out with his friends for a week.
In sum up To sum it up, those histories these stories are funny anecdotes which that we will remember over life. all our lives.
Things of Children
* use "boy" for children, "guy" for a teenager or adult
Things of children
In a small and scarce inhabited town located near Guadalquivir river, a naughtly guy who was around seven years old, lived with their parent, he used to spend everyday doing prank. One day, he had all morning been pursuing insects and putting into in diferent small box of carton.Another day, he threw a dirty ball for neighbour´s car which had been cleaned one day ago. Neighbour got very irritated and called guy´s parents. Finally, this guy was punished by parents without hanging out with his friends for a week.
In sum up,
those histories are funny anecdote which we will remember over life.
Things of Children
Corrected Entry by Connie (You have written very well and a very interesting story too!)
Childish Things
In a small and sparsely inhabited town near the Quadalquivir River, there lived a micheivous little boy of seven years old who lived with his parents. This little boy played pranks every day. One day, he collected insects. He put the insects in a box containing sections of different sizes. Another day he threw a dirty ball at a neighbor's car which had just been cleaned a day ago. The neighbor got very upset and called the boy's parents.Finally, this little boy's parents decided to punish him. They told him he could not go outside or play with his friends for one week.
Lastly, for many of us, these stories call to mind memories like these from our childhoods. We remember them always and look back at them with fondly love and humor.
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