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REVIEW. CAN YOU RECOMMEND A LOCAL RESTAURANT, CAFE OR SNACK BAR? "The sea restaurant" This is a surprising restaurant which is located in front of the beach, in Cadiz. it is an interesting place, not only for its food but also for its views and live entertainment. If you are a person who likes modern cook, "The sea" is your dreamed site. You can try from salmon tartare to a foam strawberry with chocolate shavings. You can find whatever you imagine. The chefs had worked in the most prestigious restaurants around the world and that is why their recipes are so exotic. Another special point to atend is where it is located: in front of the beach. From every table that you sit, you can see the sea and the beautiful sunsets. I think everyone in the family would enjoy eating here because in addition what I mentioned before; it has a big garden where you can witness live shows like concerts, showmans or magic shows. "the sea" is a place where you will want to visit again".

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REVIEW. CAN YOU RECOMMEND A LOCAL RESTAURANT, CAFE OR SNACK BAR?

"The Sea Restaurant"  [proper noun; needs capitalization but no quotation]
This is a surprising restaurant which is located in front of on the beach [we say "in front of the house, store, building, etc". when we are referring to someone or something located just outside/in front of the building" but "on the beach" for houses or other buildings that are located on a street adjacent to the beach], in Cadiz. It is an interesting place, not only for its food but also for its views and live entertainment. [good use of not only...but also]
If you are a person who likes modern cooking [or contemporary cuisine], "The Sea" is your dreamed site the perfect place for you. You can try everything from salmon tartare to foam strawberry foam with chocolate shavings. You can find whatever you imagine.
The chefs had have worked in the most prestigious restaurants around the world, and that is why their recipes are so exotic. [good use of "prestigious" and "exotic"]
Another special point to atend aspect is where it The Sea is located:   - right on in front of the beach. From every table that you sit, you can see the sea and watch the beautiful sunsets.
I think everyone in the family would enjoy eating here, because in addition to ["in addition to" is the phrase we commonly use] what I mentioned before;, it has a big garden where you can witness watch live shows like concerts, showmans [performances?...not sure of your meaning here] or magic shows.
"the sea" The Sea is a place where you will want to visit again".

Nicely written!

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